Pretty damn good buddy, First Family Guy fanfic I've ever read and it sure played out perfectly. Perfectly in character and pretty damn realistic could really see this as an episode. Well done! Now, considering it's 2:30 in the morning I have to get to sleep. Thanks for entertaining my mind during a restless night.

Dishonorable ninjas!

I love this and the flashbacks!

Omg stweie is just a baby

Aww I love South Park.

This was amazing! I felt really bad for Brian in most of the chapters. But overall, it was just amazing!

This is beaytiful, and brilliant. One of (If not THE) Mott gripping and enjouable things ive read on the internet. I'm not into the sexual stuff per-se. But just the way this plays on their realtionship. And the well placed drama and beautidul yet almost sad ending. Just phenominal. Please, PLEASE make more.

Sad face. Not a Brewie ending. Heartbreak. I love this ending... And yet I despise it xD.

So, I adore this story overall. It kept me intrigued the whole time and the characters were brilliant. Like. Brilliant. It was like I was reading the script of an actual episode. Bloody brilliant.

Its the middle of the night, I stayed up just to read this, and I ended up calling my best friend and squeeing and spazzing out over how cute this is. She says she's gonna read it now.

You did a fantastic job (I loved the part with Herbert) and I'm glad you included Jasper and Ricardo. Nobody ever does and it was a wonderful touch.

And Bertram. Oh how I loathe him. But I love the way you wrote for him. Magnificent job, I'll more than likely end up reading this story a zillion more times. I feel like im ranting so i'm going to shut up now.

Fantastic job, you're very talented, keep up the great work :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *sobs*

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA TOO MUCH SQUEEING!

Oh my god, amazing chapter. As soon as I read the part about the voice calling and being in a field I was like OHMYGOD A GOOFY MOVIE REFRENCE I LVE THIS PERSON EEEEEEE!

So, I love you. You're my hero xD

This story is as facinating as Peter lack of common sense. So, in other words, this is totally awesome!

Although I love this story and all of that crap, they dissed south park! Although they did have an episode with spawn of the devil on. Anyway, they all dissed the thing ain't made to be dissed or they'll be dissed for dissing the undissable. Lots of love ~ Jenna

Y'know what? I think only Brian can hear everything he says. Other only hear what they want to hear.

Not sure what I'm doing at 1am reading a slash fic on Brian and Stewie, but that obviously means this is a brilliant work of art :D I loved it, I got really attached to the plot and loved the flashbacks! You captured all the personalities perfectly, and I was actually sad that Stewie and Brian didn't get together... :/ I'm worried about myself now haha!

Good work :)