Thank you- THANK YOU- for including Noah's betrayal in this. I haven't had the chance to sit down and watch CoS in full, but I haven't read a fic that's actually addressed Noah's betrayal of Edward. There aren't many stories that feature her, probably because so many hate her, but most of them are Ed/Noah and NONE of the ones I've seen have ever addressed how Ed felt about that moment. This is exactly why the idea of a romance between them bothers me to the point that I can't even think about it without my inside's squirming uncomfortably. She STOLE his memories. That's NOT something I think Ed could shrug off. Ugh, I'm pretty sure there was a plan to hook them up in the end, but the idea of them progressing beyond being awkward friends is just... no. If you have plans to hook two characters up, don't make one of them invade the other's thoughts- especially if that someone guards their secrets as closely as Ed does. I think Ed could "forgive" her, but I don't think he would ever love her like that. Plus, there's Winry.
With that said, I'm loving Falconer- and the name you gave her. This story has me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see how it progresses.
Also, sorry for posting this review twice on two different archives. I largely prefer this site over ao3 so I just wanted to have something in my review history so I could look back and find this fic here.

The image of a alchemized water pipe snake is pretty great, and the farm couple, cliche or not was nice and likeable. Love Mustang's PoV and the flashback with Ivan.

well done on the flashback sequence, i usually hate the but this was enjoyable and amusing.

HAHAHAHAHA. Oh man, that chapter was great. Especially the beginning. And the ending.

Well... that was interesting. Dorian definitely has interesting alchemic reactions up his sleeve. And now I wonder how this fits into the rest of the story...

"The Probably-Never-Going-To-Be-Dry-Enough-To-Make-A-Spark-Again Alchemist" XD XD XD

And YAYAY! It was Mustang knocking on the door. Okay, this is goign to be fun.

Tons of water. And more suspense. And Ed, don't open the doooooooor!

Maaaaagic necklaces. XD

Hmm. That last bit threw a whole nother twist into this story. Hopefully I'll find out all about what that meant in not too long...

Whoa, interesting plot. The world is about to get ripped apart and Roy and Riza are heading to France. Oh yeah. B)

I really liked the juxtaposition of Diligence's explanation with Mustang's complaining about climbing. It worked really well.

Haha, well, this is getting interesting. And who are you, Diligence?

Well, men in white cloaks that only Mustang and Hawkeye can see are ominous. Hmm. This isn't going very well at all, is it?

I like the bits of humor you're able to put into such a suspenseful and introspective story thus far.

"At least we don't have to report to Mustang!" XD

Very fun. I already like the action and suspense and how this is getting set up.

Awwww, poor baby's a Homunculus... That saddens me greatly...

ChibiUchiha723 (2L2LI-too lazy to log in)

I appoligize for not having reviewed earlier. I just did not want to take away from he beautiful story I was reading to tell you it was so beautiful. Very selfish of me.

ITS THE OTHER ED? WHAT THE HECK! HOW COULD I NOT HAVE REALIZED THAT?AHHHHHHHH!