Great story keep up the good work

Absolutely loved it!

aww that was a good story!

Yes i hope he fights for her and show her how he really feels

sweet pluto is in the mix.

aww another sad chapter. It was beautiful.

Great chapter. Ahh A cliffhanger good thing the next chapter is already there. :)

Hi I just came across your story today and I am reviewing as I read. This first chapter is so good. I almost cried. SO touching.

OH MY GOD *SNIFF* That was beautiful(wipes the tears off my face)NOW that true love! :) If only a lot of ppl who hate mamoru could see how he feel for usagi, he shows his love for her in evry episode and comic, i mean, so he isn't open with his feelings but just like you said, every person he trusted and cared for left and he can't lose usagi.

I loved it! Great job!

Very well done!

It was a sweet, great story. I have no idea's right now, but hope u cont. writing stories. Keep it up. )

This is great. Keep up the good work. hey maybe you should put it like yes Mamoru is coming to get Usagi back but she is stuck on what she believes and thinks. And she figures that he is just doing this out of duty, responsibility, past and history, sympathy, pity, respect, and other things. Make him work for what he's lost. I mean really Mamoru doesn't really have a reason to be the way he is. I mean YES his parents died in a car crash and all he was left with was a picture, money, no memories, and an orphanage. But I mean look at Makota she lost her parents in a plane crash when she was little, had no friends, everyone always picked a fight with her, she was distant but not cold. Look at Rei she lost her mother at an early age, her father, the politician wants nothing to do with her, everyone thinks weird/bad of her because of her powers, so she is closed off and more to defend herself and snap at people(mainly Usagi) but she isn't cold to the world. Ami she lives with her mom, her mom's a head doctor and you know doctors work LONG hours, her parents are divorced. She basically spends all of her time studying since her mom's barely around. Usagi tries to break her out of it. As a result she's shy and quiet but that's it. She doesn't go cold towards the world like "my parents don't love me, they don't have time for me" cause she knows. And believe me it's worse to HAVE parents and NOT be loved than to have lost your parents because it's like you still don't have anything. You couldn't have lost what you never had. BASICALLY what I'm stating is *clear throat* "DAMMIT HE AIN'T THE ONLY ONE WITH PROBLEMS!" I don't know, maybe it's a guy thing. *shrugs* Hey maybe you could use this for someone like Pluto(I kinda like this Puu) when she's giving Mamoru an overview of himself. ANYWAYS I LUV YOUR STORY and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Update soon. Until then..Ja!

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! This is gettin VERY interesting! Let's continue!

*Does a victory dance* OH YA!

GO ENDY! GO ENDY! UH HUH! YOU KNOW IT!

LOL!

MOR EMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOE!