Very well-written, I loved it!

Go fucking kill your self and take this piece of shit with you

Ed tells Dumbledore twice about trying to transmute his mother. Thought you ought to know.

you: writes well written fanfiction that displays characters relatively accurately.
me: Yeah!
you: alwin
me: unyreah

If only it was that easy... Awesome story. :)

I can see that XD

Good story! I enjoyed reading it so good work and thank you for writing it! :D

Omg, this story was amazing! Everyone was spot on and how you did everything in only 5 chaps is amazing and it all made complete sense..so happy I found this story! :)

Love the story so far! :D

I really enjoyed this story! Wish you would consider a sequel! :D In any case, congratulations! :) Hope to read you soon! Kisses!

AWWW THAT WAS GREAT

I LOVE HOW IN SO MANY FMA/HP FANFICS ED HAS A FAN CLUB

but then again if he went to my school i'd sure as hell make him a fanclub XD

GREAT JOB!

What a great story.
I love the part about the fanclub it was so funny XD
Sincerely The Sign Painter

I realize that this is a relatively old story, but I gotta say: you tied both fandoms together very well. I bet the story would be even better with just a tad more conflict. You know, like maybe He-Who-No-One-Cares-To-Name could make an appearance. XD Other than that, you were very descriptive, and everyone was in-character as far as I could tell. Good job. :)

This was very good. I liked your turn on tranfiguration and the transmutation off and with the Philosophers Stone. Well done :)

A great read, this fic was a good length and actually had a good conclusion! I noticed a few misspellings (more like dropped letters such as 'he' instead of 'the' and the sort), but it really was not anything major and did not impair the story's quality! Thanks for writing!:D