Aw! I loved it. It's amazing, & you're right, I couldn't've put it any better! Robin's Unbroken Universe is the Harry Potter of The harry Potter Fan Fiction!

Anyway, I loved your story. I thought it was a bit short & the ending was slightly abrupt, but I loved it nonetheless.

Excellent! This is great! Perfect...emotion floods out of it.

I will not break...

I will not fall...

I made my choice...

I will stand strong...

Where'd you come up with those? Or were they from somewhere else? They were perfect for this story.

Awesome. Sirius is by far one of the best character's in 'Harry Potter' even if he is only a minor character. I;ve always thought about what would of happened if Sirius stayed as the Secret Keeper for the Potter's. Awesome one-shot

Man! If this story is a creation of your boredom, I think you need to be bored more often! Very good! Perfectly angst-ridden and well written-couldn't ask for anything better!

Wow.

Not many words other to say (and I'm in a hurry to review before the computer logs me out again for no apparent reason), but WOW. You've done a great job with this, and it made me go cold (in a good way!) more than once. Your characterizations are fantastic, and the writing is beautiful.

Great job! I hope to read more from you in the future. :)

hi megan!

this is fantastic!

I've been into Robin's UU for a while, actually some years now and you really got her style!

Like it very much!

Oh... wow... that was simply amazing! You totally captured Robin's Sirius PERFECTLY.

Wow. And any more words are lost to me right now.

Excellent job!