luv it!

I luv this sequel!

enough is enough i can't read that!

1 the yassen that i love , that everyone love can't give up his daughter!

2 julia vs yasen of course it's yassen the winner

3 if julia was alex's mother... please you know yourself! for peace in the world say that this story is alex's bad dream and i forgive you. in other hand your story is pretty written. sorry for the slash but the only thing which stay me of yassen is fanfics ( even if the author write yassen's story).

ps: i'm french so excuse me for the "fautes"

I really enjoyed this story; I'm glad you didn't have any romance between Alex and Ari too. I like how you wrote Yassen as a caring father.

Ah... great stories...

you really should make a sequal out of this one too!

Although I do think the end was rather quick ;)

x

...Can't wait for the next chapter... .

hey i really liked reading ur stories and wish you would finished this one one day soon cause its really good

dude update

Hey again ty so much for the GREAT chapter!

I can't wait for the next one so plz update when eva u can, asap. lol. Keep up the ExCELLENT work i loved the convo between Jack and Alex it was BRILLIANT!

Till next time! :)

I liked the dialog (sp?) at the beginning. Is Blunt by any chance, uh, not dead? Captured, escaped, whatnot? Cuz that would make sense.

JKoME

i love hanging out w/ procrastination, he makes amazing hot fugde sundays! (sory dont actually no how to spell it, but thats the word anyways)

y couldnt roth watever take air and yassen to neverland?i love that place.

can i be the hobo, but instead of being BEOWULF can i be a VAMPIRE?

anyways on w/ the reivew on the story, not ur an...

i have a comment about blunt. you should have him disappear and reappear somewhere else, like in the illusionist..."it's all an ill...u...sion..."

i also like the confersation...even more than u! not!

love ya. do u love me?

tell me u love me at the end of the next chapter. u have to say exactly this: i LOVE u, VSLDT, so very much.

if u say exactly that then i will no u LOVE me!

idk how to help u, sory. this was a boring chapter though, nothing against u,but it needed more ACTION! u no i love action. so heres my only suggestion...put atction into it by making a fight against m16 and scorpia. or better yet, do wat alex's dad did and play w/ scorpia if u get wat i mean.

Hey! OMG that totally sucks for Alex i mean i don't know how i'd react of i came back home to find all my family gone and someone else living in my house! I feel sory for him. I suppose i'd try to find a frind to stay with imagine if they were gone too, hoe depressed would you feel. This was a really good chapter by the way, EXCELLENT and ty for the fast update! I can't believe you updated so fast so ty again. Keep up the GREAT work and update again soon, asap please.

Till then, AD:) (a.k.a She Weapon1)

that was awesome. the last line added to the story. i think i is totally wicked that julia is alex's mom and jones is his aunt! cant wait to read more, but please update fact meets fiction too!

love ya!

Yay! Wonderful Angst! :D I like it way better when Julia is Alex's mom(to be honest, I didn't like the Helen was described in the real AR books...sounded like a damsel in distress type) Anyways, update ASAP!(can you do a little quicker this time? Pwetty Pwease? -gives puppy eyes-)