A very nerve wracking ending! I really hope you continue to write this story! It has a unique and interesting pull to it!

This looks so epic! The first chapter/prolouge really pulls the reader and leaves them no choice but to read on!

i liked your "edwin chronicles" series so i tried reading your other stories as well. this caught my attention and i was interested to read this story.

the prologue was very intense...it was like a different version on the promised day part.

anyways, i'm looking forward to your updates on this story.

nice work on this! XD

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YAY! :holds up giant foam finger with SELF-ADVIRTISING: NO.1! on it: It's okay, I do teh same thing all the time! :D

Good start so far-the prolouge made me hanging for more and so did that damn last line about her being a hostage. It was a very "W.T.F!" moment for me. LOL

AR!

Why doesn't this have more reviews?

I love this so far! Everything is flawless and feels like it came straight out of the manga. The situations, the dialog, all of it is very believable. The prologue was gripping, and I liked the slight departure from canon that you did in Chapter 1.

I can't wait for future chapters and I hope you continue this.

i luv how this story is coming and the prolouge is so good!_~

Great chapter ! I'll be looking forward to the next update :)

Okay...why is chapter 2 the same as chapter 1? *grins* Please fix!

Great beginning, keep up the good work ! And please update soon

Ah, for someone who hasn't posted for two years, it looks like you're doing a good job with the story so far. Hope that you do keep it up, it looks very interesting to me.

omg, i already LOVE this story! and i totally love the protectivness of ed over winry! you should make some more of that! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I liked it...

Very interesting...

So the hidden transmutation circle was one put there by Father (right?) and Envy slashed Winry to get Ed angry and do that...

ZOMG I GET IT!

*gasp*

I thought it was great. Keep up the fine work!

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Oh. My. GOODNESS.

You're quite good at keeping up the suspense in this prologue- and what is Hohenheim doing there? I wonder...hm...

Nevertheless, this intro was AWESOME! I'm seriously caught up in how you ended it- what's gonna happen?

(But I guess I have to wait a while ofr that part to continue, huh?)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, YO! This story is off to a good start! ;)

I'm slightly confused but I like it and think you should continue!