Really good job on the description and dislogue. I don't neccesarily like Harry Potter fan-fiction. But this was very good.

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I really liked this story.I think i'm going to put you on my ,I think I 't listen to anyone who flames have no heart at all if they want to flame a story about a young harry!Ecspecially this kind!

Uhh, to tell you the truth, it kinda sucks. No offense but I really hate these kind of fics.

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very sweet and truthful very jk!

Your monologues are quite well done, Nemo. My only nitpick is that you should use a spellchecker, a few words were misspelled. Other than that, great story!

ooo... very true... loved it

that was perfect. i loved it. it's almost exactly like what happened to harry when he was a child. it'ds way better than lots of the stories i read

I can imagine Harry doing that...so sad, but true. Great job. I wonder why child welfare doesn't do something about those Dursley's...

ACK! Self-pity! Harry's not like that! But otherwise, it was OK, I love fics where people hate him, 'cause it makes me love him even more. He is so sweet!

It's very good-exactly like what a 9-yr-old Harry would be thinking. Poor kid-he didn't ask for that kind of life. (It's a wonder why he didn't get the spirit knocked out of him in the first 10 years-resilient kid.)

Good story. You are very good at portraying characters and how they feel. I really mean that! I wish I could do this as well as you!

that was but it could have been better

Hey! Whoa! I really like it! Why would somebody need criticism on such a good piece as this? Keep writing, Nemo! *Grin* - Shadow