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Definitly good! Amazing, even, to watch the Evil Eye discovering such a strange (and beautiful) connection.

PS: Akabane-sama does feels pain, he just choose to ignore while he can!

Very nice. I liked it a lot.

Yes! I loved this! I'm begging you to write more! Maybe not with this story, but if you happened to write another oneshot I'd so read it! Your style is entertaining and easy to read.

No "shameless, pathetic begging" required! This was great. Umm...okay so now it's my turn to beg shamelessly and pathetically...don't suppose you'd consider a sequal?

I love that you are doing these stories as part of your creative writing class! Smart idea, I wish I had done that when I had the chance. I wonder what your teacher thinks? This makes me want to become a teacher so I can read fan fics as part of my job, ha ha! Seriously though, the stories are great and much appreciated. I did read this one as BanxGinji as is my preference, but I think it was also done well for a AkabanexBan wiht out making eiterh character too out of canon. I may not get the time to review all the time but I will be reading. Thanks!

Nice little fic. :) One bit, though. If Ginji took a bullet like that, especially if it was as close to the heart as you mentioned, I don't think he'd be walking out of the hospital in just a few hours' time. Chest/shoulder wounds of that sort would take quite a while to recover from (at least several weeks if not longer, depending on the severity of the injury), even taking into account Ginji's peculiar electrical powers as they pertain to his ability to revive himself. (And no, I'm not a doctor or medical personnel of any kind, this is just my guess since I've had to do research on such things as well.)

Otherwise, it was a good fic, and I hope you do more Ban/Akabane. :) Very sorry to hear about your friend, and I hope that things get better for both of you.