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drink me up papi

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

Good. Hope it will continue.

this is annoying he needs to learn how to speak and are you really putting the eye of sauron in this and really Alexander in a Japanese world really

Awesome story, don't forget to keep it going

Hi there. Author's notes are not allowed to be posted as chapters. I know you're upset about no sex scenes being allowed in stories. Heck, even I wish it were allowed, but unfortunately it isn't and the site isn't going to change their rules. That is why they have . I suggest you take this down and post it on your page instead as well as the second to last chapter. You're entire story can be pulled because of them.

Signed,

DarkSacredJewelXoX

[Founder of Critics United]

how do i sign this petition?

I have already signed it but do you think it will work I hope so but I have my doubts I'm afraid they just going to ignore it.

c i am a dragon

cool 1 really liked this chapter -

Enjoyable. A lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. The plot is pretty interesting. The storyline is fine. The only problem with the story is the writing.

an interesting idea and would continue reading, but your lack of understanding on how to actually write leaves me with no other choice then to stop.

awsome

I love it please continue.