Reviews for Secrets in the Will of Fire
Wiccan Queen chapter 5 . 3/7/2012
Plz update soon
EditorFin chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
Awesome story shame youll probably never update
Nycel chapter 5 . 2/28/2011
this is great are you going to continue please inform me also are you going to change naruto cloth he could by them and a sword at tentens shop
Timdraco chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
looks good, cant wait for next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Lady Knight Keladry chapter 5 . 7/11/2010
I really like that bit where they switch places; I think they oculd have used the lesson :D Anyway, it's nice to see a fic where Naruto has a bit of help in his development without him turning into a total Stu. I'm happy that Naruto was developed enough to suggest teamwork in the bell test. I've really enjoyed reading this, should I ever expect more? Probably not, right?
kenkao.inukags chapter 5 . 1/20/2010
i wish you'd update this. good story.
Karl Skywalker chapter 5 . 1/20/2010
Great story!

I really enjoyed this story! :D I enjoyed how Naruto is developing and his interaction with the people around him. I loved Sasuke and Naruto's switch of place. I would thought they would have taken turn in declaring the superiority of winner ;) :p Seriously, I am surprised taht Sasuke did not ask Naruto for the reason for the hatred by the village. I also am pleased with Sakura's maturation in the story :) She is getting to be more of second arc Sakura than first arc. It seems that She is starting to fall out of crush with Sasuke and into Naruto, not that she realize it yet. Good progression on their friendship and a beginning of relationship. I also love the ending of this chapter... it is the first time I ever had seen Team 7 giving up their bells to be with Naruto.

Looking forward to another chapter!
jmg1988 chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
Great story so far. Hope you update soon.
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Please Continue!
Summons Shadow chapter 5 . 6/7/2009
Good

Story
Maileesaeya chapter 5 . 1/27/2009
I like this story. If you look at most NaruHarem fics, Sasuke is an antagonist. I don't like him all that much (he was okay from about the beginning of the Wave mission till the beginning of the Tsunade search arc), but it's still nice to see him portrayed in a friendly manner every once in a while.

Also, another thing I like is the removal of Hinata from the Harem. She's an okay character for me, but one thing I've noticed about most NaruHarem fics is that she's almost always the first girl in the Harem, and I think this is the first one where she hasn't been a part of it at all (or at least, the first good one).

Anyways, please update soon, I'll be looking forward to it!
cravensvt chapter 5 . 11/9/2008
Normally I don't like stories that change much before they become Genin. This seems interesting so far.

I was also wondering if you are gonna be taking voting on Hana being in the Harem, if you are then thats a big yes she should be.
imgonnadie chapter 5 . 11/1/2008
Excellent story so far. Please do continue to write. I eagerly await your next chapter
Shinen no Hikari chapter 3 . 10/12/2008
yay i'm glad that you decided to reconsider and bring hinata into the harem. oh great story by the way.
Kael Hyun chapter 5 . 10/8/2008
Please dont forget that they did 5 or 6 months of D rank missions (The anime states (Acording to naruto's Calender) that it was October 15th when Naruto eather took the final exam or got team placements
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