Medyo mabaho english mo ahh

LOL! I love it! so cute and beautiful! and the last part makes me laugh! they switch! :D

hmm i almost thought you're an indonesian XD cute, its cute and brush up your grammar okey? :)

This fict is cute, really. If you make it more intense it will be great. I like the part where mori admit that she's useless. but ueki said that being useless is not matter to him, the important thing to him that mori's his friend and his precious person.

hehehe. there's an error that I notice in your fict.

you typed "awaked". but i think it is "awoke".

my english isn't good too. I may have wrote an error review. *grin

Yo! The story is really cute and wonderful. nice work you got there! :D

It's ok if it's OOC, I still love it... :D

So cute! My favorite pairing ever! And it's not too long or weird. I love it!

This was cute!

A little bit out of character, but I still absolutely loved it! :D

this is romantic keep on writing!

I saw quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes...but everyone makes mistakes right? Proofreading once again wont hurt right?

I like the idea, I really do. It has a really kawaii storyline!

OH! that was cute!

NICE! KAWAII!

i love it...

r u kidding me?this is the best story that i had ever u might want to add a little romantic or kissing scene or even some lemon nice job.

The story is very sweet. I think you need to brush up your grammar, to make the story even better.

that was great make another one and make it longer k?