This was an amazing story just like its predecessor and I really enjoyed it. Just a suggestion, you of course have no obligation to do this, but I thought you could maybe write a prequel about Tobias Snape's career and life. Again no way are you obliged to write this I just thought it would be an awesome story. I totally loved this story and I hope you keep on writing as you have great talent.

I like the the story and this sequel. serenity is a hypocrite, she judged Eileen so harshly and did the same thing herself. atleast Ginny didn't do the same to harry, and no matter my opinion on hinny, i liked it in this story. and I like your approach to Tobias, and how Severus and Harry as be kind of fathers' themselves, learning from Tobias. firm but loving. it's really good.

Funny thing is... With this version of Tobias I keep picture Gibbs from NCIS. He just keeps popping into my with everything he does.

Is there a sequal ?

Honestly the same as Harry I was expecting her to be a boy... I also really hate Serenity and love the OCD part of Severus...

The brotherly moment between Sev and Harry was awesome...
-Liam

The caller is Unbridge as this creature plans to continue it's attacks.

What ever it is Unbridge is connected to both what happened to the Dursley's and this girl from the house of snakes. The fact it was a student from the snake house is strange knowing she is a snake who looks like a toad. This thing was meant for Harry to use magic against to get him expelled from school and sent to Askaban for the death of Cedric and being a lier.

Who are the Gryffindor prefects for 5th year.

I say it was Harry mother who attacked the Dursley's.

I am going to go back and read the first story and then fully read this one. I do find it funny that Harry and his potion teacher are brothers.

The brain monster was a bit weird, but overall this was an enjoyable story; an excellent follow-up to Brothers and Fathers.

thanks for the great story

thank you for your time and talented

thanks