| Reviews for Nightmare |
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BarbT chapter 3 . 1/17/2018 Wish you'd finished this, I like the in-depth view. |
FranArian chapter 3 . 7/29/2016 This was going along nicely...wish there was more. |
Eleanor Harkness-Jones chapter 3 . 4/28/2011 I am really enjoying this! Please update! |
xx-until.I.die-xxx chapter 3 . 12/5/2009 oh my god. that was amazing! brilliant :D |
glistening moon chapter 3 . 10/1/2009 good written. update again. please... i enjoy this story, so please finish it. :) |
Anime Girl23 chapter 3 . 9/25/2008 I really like this fic! Any chance of an update? Please! |
Romy Katherine chapter 3 . 3/4/2008 This is great. I'm guessing it's still in progress because it's not complete yet, so any chance of an update any time soon? |
bbmcowgirl chapter 3 . 1/13/2008 Loave this story. I'm new to this fandom so every story is new to me. Yours is the first Countrycide I've read. Please hurry with an update. Judy |
AlidaHush chapter 3 . 11/15/2007 Brilliant. I love this story and I do hope there's going to be more of it. I want to know if Ianto is gonna be alright. |
harknessfan chapter 3 . 11/7/2007 I really enjoyed your story. It's been a long time since I've read any fanfic and even longer since I wrote any myself. I have to say this was very well done! I had been wanting more Torchwood than I was able to get and this helped tremendously to fill that need. :) Also, this story needed some elaboration (as do most of them) which is why I love the show so much... it allows room for our imaginations to wander. ;) I liked the way you took time to delve into each character's thoughts and feelings. It provided a depth that just isn't possible in TV. Thanks again for the entertainment! :) |
wildfirexpassion chapter 3 . 11/5/2007 Everybody Loves Ianto. xD Good story - just a few spelling mistakes, as earlier pointed out. I still think this is a great story, and that you should UPDATE SOOn. Yes. xD Good job! |
JennMel chapter 3 . 11/5/2007 This is a really great story. It's nice to see a character centric fic that doesn't just blank off all the other characters, you've constructed the team dynamics really well. And I also like how you've written Owen as he is in the show, and haven't gone down the root of making him OOC as many fics seem to. |
Nychta Brhoche chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 M, tasty. I'm really liking this. Just found it today and I see it was just updated but already I can't wait for more. I hope you don't mind a little concrit... your plotting and pacing are good to excellent. Your ability to set a scene and evoke a mood are impressive. However, there are a lot of comma splices in your work. This is a grammar problem that can usually be fixed by proper use of a semi-colon or by breaking up the splice into two (or more) sentences. Also, I noticed a number of mis-spellings that a spell checker should have caught, as well as a few it would not have. If you don't mind I'm going to point out a few that would have been missed by a computer. I noticed a tendency for you to spell words that should be spelled with an "ee" or with just an "a" with an "ea" instead. A few examples - stearing (as in a car), breaks (again, car), greatful, speach. These should be, respectively: steering, brakes, grateful, and speech. Also, one really eye-catching mis-spelling : you wrote illicited when you meant elicited; an easy mistake if you've never seen the latter in print before. I'm not trying to be overly picky. Your work is so good that I'd like to see these kinds of things tightened up because it would help it to be even better. I think your work shows great promise and I really enjoy it - and I will continue to follow your in progress stories. I hope you find some of what I've said helpful - that is its intent. I look forward to your future work. |
coffeemagic chapter 3 . 11/4/2007 aww you made me like owen! i wouldn't have thought it possible... can't wait for more |
PromiseTheStars chapter 3 . 11/4/2007 Aww! I feel so sad for Ianto. "Ianto tried to focus, but it was just to hard and it hurt to much. He knew that he should be concerend, the voice that was talking to him sounded concerned, but he just couldn't bring himself to care." That line almost got me crying! [ Cant wait for the next chapter :D |