Reviews for The Death of Isabella Marie Swan
Missysue32 chapter 9 . 12/20/2019
That was good! I thought she was changing from her fall and making the venom in her bones (etc) from James , break loose when she fell that hard on her back. It was really sweet at the very end!
Immortalityismyspecialty chapter 9 . 6/21/2018
Hi, I just wanted to say that your story is amazing and your possibly the best writer on here. Your spelling is great unlike a ton of authors on here, and when authors spell things wrong, I don’t know why, but it just straight up annoys me. Great job!
Caz1105 chapter 9 . 8/12/2013
Short and sweet. Can't believe you wrote this 6 years ago. Well there's loads of us still loving all things Twilight so write some more xxx
crotia chapter 9 . 7/13/2013
wonderfull. And I thinking that she would die and she didn't
Syndi-Dowell chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
Sweet story. :)
Monica chapter 9 . 10/2/2011
It's really good! It could have went into more dept of her at the hospital, but overall it's really good.
MissKaylaH chapter 9 . 3/28/2011
What happened to the ring ?
mysinger chapter 9 . 7/3/2010
I loved this story, especially the part where Bella thought Carlisle asked if she found him attractive. Well done!
Lemonade Ninja chapter 9 . 3/10/2010
Okay, I don't normally do this, but HOLY CRAP! This story was SO well written. And intense! Magnificant job! This is totally going into my favorites! I just spent a little over an hour reading this story in whole, so I need to go to bed, but once again, great job!

Lemonade Ninja.
sintRizzie chapter 9 . 12/24/2009
just curious, where is the ring? i assume they just had to put it off for the test?
Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
Appendicitis! Am I right?
Bella Dazzles chapter 9 . 7/10/2009
Ruptured Appendix! As soon as she threw up I knew what it was...haha..I ruptured mine when i was 13, I have a rediculously high pain tolerance and it was 3 days before I felt enough pain, the doctors only thought my appendix was inflamed and by the time they cut into me they said my body was so full of toxins that I never should have woken up that morning let alone survived the 12 hours in the hospital waiting for my operation. At the time I weighed about 98lbs and had enough toxins in my system to kill a person twice my weight...the doctors said I either had some greater purpose for being put on the planet or I just had one hell of a will to live...
mudpuddledemon chapter 9 . 6/21/2009
Well I thoroughly enjoyed that. I'm quite fond of pain and peril, and also lying on kitchen floors, so this was just perfect for me. I like you 'daring' subject matter and that it wasn't just a quick mention, but the focal point of the story.
Paper'Paige chapter 9 . 6/21/2009
lol this fic was great :)
OchreEyes chapter 9 . 5/30/2009
Hi.

Uhm.

where was Bella's engagement ring?

it wasn't mentioned.

:D

Love the story.
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