Oh, ow! So heart wrenching! But you really got Simon and the shows essence down to a "T"!

well written, heart wrenching, and very good.

This was beautiful, exactly the combination of emotions I think Simon feels...he knows he's smart, and yet he doesn't let that cloud how deeply he cares about people and just wants to help. And I definitely think he feels guilty about River.

Very powerful for a short piece! Thanks for sharing!

This story is really sad. You really hit a tender spot within he character of Simon. Very well written!

Oh, I liked this a lot. And I liked how you inserted the bit about the Alliance officer (from the unaired Dead or Alive script?) into the story as well:)

I like this one a lot, I think it captures the character really well.