cute

I loved it. Having different superheroes and a villain coming to the house, Martha being welcoming and all.

Lol

/snicker
Oh, the things this poor woman puts up with... Excellently done!

Very entertains. I really like how you set this up. Great originality.

So cute and v lovely to read - I loved it!

I LOL'd so hard. Well done!

Cute. I love your take on Martha.

This was PERFECT! What an absolutely cool and clever way to show them-through Martha's eyes. The balance of surreal and everyday normal makes this delightful. You really caught the personalities of everyone-and how Martha responds, no matter who is coming into her house, is exactly a mother's response. So funny to see how she is used to all the insane entrances and questions. Loved the story-you really have a skill at capturing characters with dialogue and exact imagery. Each shot isn't long, but it is exactly right. Thanks!

I love this story! It's now one of my favs!

Perfect! I love this, I've read it a gazillion times and it never gets old. I especially like how you didn't just focus on the Big 7, you added in smaller characters like Solovar and Ace. A wonderfully refreshing and well-written piece.

Bravo!

nice. Martha is one tough cookie. and a calm one too!

Wow this has me respecting Mrs. Kent a whole lot more now. I would just never unlock my doors and twitch when the door opened. XD

Mrs. Kent just does not even blink. But then again she raised Superman sooo...yeah.

Very cute.

~Blue Rowan

She adopted a boy and gained many more children! I like this story quite a lot. It's shows how mothers are understand of their children.

"Are you picking up the bottled universe?"

Ha! I love Superman's mother! And you did her so well!