Finish it.

i liked it! i wish borias would have lived to c xena turn good in the show! keep up the great work

are you ever going to finish this one? i think it has alot of potential and i really like it

That was super short. I like where you're going with this, but hoping for another twist and turn maybe some relationship development between two characters. Hint hint lol. No but serious I would have liked to see more raw emotion exposed from either Xena or Borias maybe even both. Their reaction was just so calm that its a little uncharacteristic for these characters. Because even if its not super obvious like they're screaming or something like that. For their character well Xena's because I know her best is her powerful emotions would be conveyed in a look maybe an indication to her body language and naturally her actions. So if she doesn't go charging off your best bet is to rely on all subtle cues like body language and looks. Even her tone of voice.

Gabrielle's line for telling Xena that Solan was taken seemed long and not a lot of urgency like she kind of cared enough to tell her friend what happen, but not enough to actually care for Solan which is untrue. Now Joxer right on the money, leave it to him to get hit by the staff and knocked unconscious and make us all laugh. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm curious to see if it still kind of keeps along the story line of the ep with of course the already obvious changes or takes a completely different turn of events. Good luck.

Dude im really hating you right now with this whole you have to be signed in to review mess! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG IT TOOK ME JUST TO REMEMBER MY PASSWORD!...anyways your story was really good I thought your plot in the story was the best part about it cause i can actually see it happening as an ep... well the parts you made up of course. another thing is that the story can be really confusing cause you put the characters words on the same line as each other. If i wasn't familiar with the characters then i wouldn't know who is saying what. Your character development is right on point though especially with all the Gabrielle parts. I swear you know more about the show than me and i have been watching longer than you and own the seasons thats the funny part cause i counldnt pull this off. lol good job!

ur story is startng off really good. please contiue with it. i would like 2 finish it .

Interesting, is it finished? If it isn't Id be pleased if you continued it.

This is a great start to an interesting change of events. I can't wait for the next part.

Awesome chapter, but their voice it doesn't sound quite right though your words are something they would say. I don't know, when I read it in my head I can't quite see it as them mentally, you know? I'm sorry I can't be more concise I am trying to offer you constructive criticism. Be careful about your quotes too at the beginning they were all on the same line, just gotta make sure you hit the enter button. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.

This story is officially on my awesome list, I love it. Please update, because I would be very upset if you did not, what you have here is awesome though I do recommend separating your quotes. It'll flow better and look a lot better. You can't do that with quotes unless its the same person speaking and there's something between the quotes of course. You may as well be at a library with a librarian who hates to read and that's an oxymoron.