I loved that ending.

I really like those stories wherein it's shown of how much power Yugi has over Atem. I dunno why, I guess it's just because most stories have it that Atem/Yami Yugi is always the on in control.

So I really really LOVE how you wrote this, especially its concept

awww that was so romantic, I mean the ending
not the beginning. Well depends on how you look at it.
you know, I bet some of us feel just like Yugi.
Tired of making other happy and the content judging.

this was pretty interesting
I'll admit, when you started big word on me I got lost
but i found my way lol

but I loved it none the less

Er, the beginning confused me a bit. Well, actually I was confused throughout it all. Eheh. I get the idea that Yuugi was troubled and trying to get away from everything but on top of a building? Talk about adrenaline lover lol. At any rate, wow! A very unique read if I say so myself. Definitely isn't something I've ever read about. And the characterization of both Yuugi and Atemu were wonderful. Atemu was especially yummy. xD; Quite standoffish to anyone aside from Yuugi just like in the manga. It's a shame the anime downed his dark personality so much. Ah well. Nicely done!

if we all had a yami like that, we'd also probably be jumping off buildings more, for the hell of it or no.

great fic,

brittney

That was great! I loved it!

I thought that was pretty funny that Yugi was nice and calm with everyone freaking out about him just sitting on the roof.

That was really very interesting. I love the way you captured them like that. Though it was kind of obscure how they got from an obscure rooftop to their room. D:

oh well, I'm sure it made sense to you somewhere along the lines. I wish I could write stuff like this. :/

Wonderful work, my dear.

Tenshi

That was interesting. I love how it was all dark then suddenly it wasn't t. That was cool.

Oh my GOSH!

I can't believe it! I was just browsing along, and I found this! Do you KNOW how shocked I was to find out you had a fanfiction account?

Okay, I should probably explain.

I was on a website that had fan-made submitted doujins. There were some of yours on there, I found. I read them, and LOVED them. I've read some of them twice.

And then, when I looked here and found Gravity, I knew I recognized it, so I opened it and skimmed through a bit of the dialogue to check, finding that it WAS in fact the Gravity from the doujin!

I'm very happy now. It's nice to read both forms...enriches the experience, you know?

Ja ne!

vampgirl8

That was pretty deep, but I loved it! Please read my profile to give me an idea on what to write for a story! Thanks!

Whee! Happiness!

That was really interesting. I'd never seen the bond that way before, and it's made me think. Get this cat OFF.

So yeah, excellent work once more. I'm gonna find myself thinking about this for quite a while. I love it when a story makes me do that.

'Kay, gotta stop; this is really difficult. Thanks for writing all of these!

-Kayura

Allow me a moment to say aw!

that was a good story. I liked it.

beautiful... Just beautiful