| Reviews for Hidden Past |
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sorry chapter 10 . 2/28/2011 srry but this chaptr is stupid just like ur story |
Rin Kagamine250 chapter 4 . 2/27/2011 good story cant wait till u make the next chapter |
prinsesita100 chapter 9 . 1/22/2011 pobre kaome... plis sigue con la historia quiero saber que pasa despues espero que todos se enteren pronto que fue el padre de kaome enserio es una muy buena historia |
chibion chapter 9 . 10/19/2009 WOW! you are a wonderful writer! why dont you continue the story? now im wondering what happens... |
Short But Deadly chapter 9 . 3/24/2009 O my God I feel sorry for Kagome... you know must people who read this are going to be like why she went back if her father hut her and blah, blah, blah. But what most people don’t know is how abuse affects you not only physically but mentally as well. It can come to the point that the victim thinks it’s all his/her fault. And the whole family gets affected. like in most abuse cases someone who is not being abused (like Sota) can also be effected he might get ager issues or lose trust in others (the victims like kagome tends to lose most if not all trust in others).also its a cycle, one minute everything is fine then something triggers the abusers anger (bad day at work, things not gong his/her way, jealousy, etc), then the abuse comes into play(it could be a hit/physical or just words/mental/emotional. after that comes the blame( it’s YOUR fault, YOU keep pushing me, YOU, YOU, YOU...they look at themselves as if THEY are the victims).then honeymoon (the abuser buys something or is extra nice, trips, whatever they can do to get back on the good graces of the victim). this is followed by the calm before the storm(everything seem normal, almost to normal... like the eye of the storm/hurricane. the it starts all over again only it gets worse each time. I’m a psychology major so I read about this in one of my books. I hope that you look more into this for your own (it could help your writing and give you more ideas). o and I like the story keep up the good work... damn I wrote a lot sorry _! |
Bleeding Rose Mitsuki chapter 9 . 9/11/2008 love the chapter theres drama everywhere on this chapter lol its ok kim not a big fan of drama but u make drama as a new word to me with what u written she should b stronger about the insitent i mean shes been scared for life yea i kno but some1 needs to heal up that scar dont u think? lol nice and awesome chapter hope u make the next chapter even more awesomer ! thx! |
Reaching You chapter 9 . 8/31/2008 about time! how long has this been here? anwho, you BETTer update, or i'll hunt you down and...GIVE YOU A VERY STERN TALKING TO! YESH! XD JK |
bmo-galaxy chapter 9 . 8/26/2008 omg you have to write more! |
Dengen chapter 9 . 6/24/2008 Though I'm not one for drama and or stories similar to yours. I have to admit that yours is one that I throughly enjoy. I would love if you could complete more chapters and continue your story. Please, the suspense is to much. And, this chapter is great. Really puts Kagome's point of view into perspective. Dengen |
Summer Jasmine chapter 9 . 5/29/2008 good story, it's well written and thought out. keep up the good work. can't wait to see what happens next. |
oswin-the-girl-who-can chapter 9 . 5/28/2008 Oh... my... gosh... Poor Kagome! T_T It's not fair... But you rock for having the guts to right this awesome story! Points to you! And points to Princess Stormcloud0217 for helping you to write a new chapter! Hooray! -Dedicated Reader, Kaitlyn |
oxsugarxcoatedxo chapter 9 . 5/26/2008 omg this was so sad but i love it! please update soon |
Alanna-sama chapter 9 . 5/26/2008 poor kagome |
Annalisa Yoru chapter 9 . 5/26/2008 Inuyasha must be heart broken...not to mention ticked. Good job, love the story |
Princess Stormcloud0217 chapter 9 . 5/26/2008 OH THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU, for reveiwing! Your writing is much too good just to end! Plus, thanks a lot for what you said about my review! I trully love this fic! |