That was funny considering Jaken likes My Little Pony. I don't watch the show myself but I don't put down others for liking certain things.

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the fact that there was an overall plot connecting the chapters. More often than not, the chapters were hilarious. Jaken's antics were especially funny; I'll never be able to look at him without thinking of My Little Pony. Seriously, Sesshomaru is the father of two little girls, with Jaken acting more of a girl than Rin. :) Ah-Un eating and damaging cars was pure genius and extremely funny. I enjoyed every encounter with Inuyasha and co. and I would have liked to have seen them in the story more. How would have Inuyasha reacted to Sesshomaru dating a human? (Either Sarah or Lazuli) That would have been a fantastic chapter.

The beginning chapters imply the entire story was going to be Sessohmaru and co. going to different places/doing different things and all the chaos that would ensue, however the story turned into more of a romantic comedy of sorts. I would have preferred the former, but the story was still funny so I enjoyed it. The chapters that weren't as funny didn't bring a lot to the table and were long, such as the first part of the Christmas story and the stories you labeled as 'plot bunnies'. Perhaps having them as bonus stories once you posted the final chapter would have worked better? About the ending, I think the plot twist that Sesshomaru was dating Sarah because he didn't want to admit to his feelings about Lazuli was interesting (and very like Sessy; he'd never outright admit who he actually wanted to be with), but I think Sessy didn't act very much like himself in the last chapter. Reading about the joy of Rin and Jaken with the success of OLAS was fun and heartwarming.

About the sequel you advertise in the 21st chapter, the link doesn't work and the search engine comes up empty. I want to read it. You mentioned on your profile page that you were deleting some of your stories. Did you delete the sequel? :( I hope not!

I enjoyed your story very much and look forward to hearing about and reading the sequel (even if you only have the first chapter done). Thanks for writing this story!

i love these little dabbles and the ending, now on to the sequel :p

lol i loved sesshs reaction to the hot chili pepper poor thing!

I also loved the bit of cuteness at the end :)

this fic is so funny im definately reading the sequel as well :)

loving this fic so far, good job :p

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! Ah-Un sounds adorable! good jod you gave them a cute personality!

Ah-Un and email?! ok this is different

Well it was okay I guess I mean can't say much for Lazuli who perfers Sesshomaru over sweet little Inuyasha but then I just think he looks and acts like a selfish bully myself guess I've met to many in my life and he has never seemed all that sexy to me I perfer the little boy type who honest and sincere in who they are and are always a touch innocent in their actions and feelings and the story was really pretty ooc in all respects I mean Inuyasha would never be that stupid and Sesshomaru would never be that reasonable but other than that it's not to bad the writing was pretty good and the plot was cute.

I read this whole fanfic while I was at work. I dare say that it is a work of art. I love what you did to the characters. Thank you for finally getting Sesshomaru to dump Sarah! I hated that character. Probably because I've met too many people just like her. The camping episode was, eh, not my favorite but I must say I loved the Christmas one.

AW COMMON! WHY DID HER NAME HAVE TO BE JESSICA! :'( That's my name...

anywho, awesome story btw :)

OMG! i could not stop laughing!

Hahah! This chapter was just so hilarious!

awsomeness that was awsome it was funny and kinda stupid at the begining but so cute at the end.

if i could rate that would be a 5.98

that was awsome ice cream,cookies,and pizza hut! you rule