PLEASE finish this story! It's so good, and I want to find out what happens to Bec!

Can you update this, please?

better not end here...

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and that is my sad attempt at being scary... :'(

I don't care...I still love Sunny...and Sides.

UPDATE SOOOOOON!

OKAY, since I'm commenting before reading, I'm probably going to regret it, but whatever. I have to respond to the fact about you and the Terror Twins. THEY ARE PRETTY DARN AWESOME! I can't believe Michael Bay didn't have Sideswipe AND Sunstreaker together, but whatever. THE TWINS ARE THE AWESOMEST IN MY OPINION! ALONG WITH JAZZ BECAUSE HE IS AWESOME TOO

You don't know how nice it is to read a story that is well written, has a plot, and realistic characters! Your stories are fantastic and sooooo compelling - I even sneaked off read this one when I really really should have been getting ready for house guests arriving tomorrow.

BUT, then they just all stop... Why? Are you posting them elsewhere? These are some of the best fics I've read, and it's really sad to not see them finished :(

On the one hand: original characters and the humans are frickin’ annoying. On the other hand, finally someone takes the perspective of an Autobot who doesn’t care about the humans and is, in fact, abusive because he just doesn’t give a crap. Also, finally, an original character who isn't bold and adventurous and brave! Bleh. Five parts in, it’s an interesting read worth checking on for updates!

Your writing is really something. It's... strangely engrossing. I find myself caring for the human protagonists, even the side characters I never really gave much thought about when watching the movies. Like Judy, for example. I merely recall her to be somewhat annoying in the movies but you gave so much dimension and depth to her character that I ended up becoming rather fond of her. It's surprising too, considering you mentioned that you're only familiar with the movie-verse because all the characters including the autobots were written really well. Of course, this is coming from someone whose knowledge is also limited to movie canon (lol) but I can safely say that nothing felt out of place. Your interpretation, way with the characters, and ability to weave the story together were all SO good they convinced me. Too bad this isn't a pairing fic - I would've liked to see how Sunny x Bec would work out. This could be immensely interesting and, undoubtedly, complex. I'm usually a bit wary of canon x OC fics but judging by your writing, I'm absolutely sure you could pull it off spectacularly. Your other work, 'And Eyes That I Might See' was also lovely (and pairing-less, to my utter disappointment lol). Anyway, what an enjoyable read! Please continue~ Sorry for rambling. :)

wow, i love your sunstreaker

love this story!

Oi! What a cliffhanger! Please do continue- this story is much too good to just end at 'we're under attack!'.

What a great job, this tale really made me laugh and suffer with the characters.

Bec is a very interesting character, but I think my favourite is Judy, who knows everything and is micro-managing the Autobots and the ministry of defense all between cooking breakfast and watering her roses *giggles* It's so hilarious when everyone was freaked out by her knowledge! And Optimus AND Keller are scared of her, hehehe! Your Judy is just made of awesome!

I laughed like crazy that moment when Sunstreaker was so indignant that Bec was dusting her freaking houseplants, but she wouldn't even send him through the car wash. And she'd insulted his color, oh noes! Poor abused Autobot! I was shocked how badly their first "real" meeting went, though. I felt so sorry for Bec.

I love the friendship between Jazz and Bec and watching Trent grow up. At the very least, I bet he'll never vandalise another mailbox! *snickers*

Since there are only two months of the year left, I'm optimistic that we won't have to wait all too long for an update. Am I right? *hopeful puppy eyes* I really can't wait to read more, this story is so addicting!

Please, please, update soon! I enjoy this story and I hope that Bec and Sunstreak get better.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. It's an interesting setup you've got. Judy's a pushy overprotective mother, Trent's trying to get along with 'the gang', and Bec is a delight all by herself. Trying to get away from the life of luxury. Peace.

Cool, update soon.