Good story, enjoying reading it but there's a couple of things like the fact that James is a chaser not a seeker and JKR said so herself and also the scores would have to be multiples of ten so 156-147 would be impossible.

I like how lily is good at quiddich too in this fix but it sometimes seems like

finaly! a story where ppl actualy get their quidditch facts right! in all the other stories james is chaser. HE WAS THE SEEKER!

i love it

Amazing! I want more!

I love this story. It's a new twist and I really like that. My only concern is her being such a target for Voldemort and I really hope that James's parents don't die because of him. According to JKR his parents were order and there was nothing to suggest that his parents or Lily's were killed.

I love this chapter! Update soon, I can't wait! :D

hey (:

i like your story it's adorable and really freaky at times and i'm so scared for lily ahh!

update please?

x

I really like this story but ibeould like to point out the James is a chaser, not seeker

This story is really good :).

I hope everything will ne alright with Daniel...

And James & Lily kissed! Can she just say how she feels already?

Hi

I really like your story.. )

Keep it up... I like all the action on there.. Its not always that you get a story with so much action...

Good work

Lily is an idiot... I love James he is so cute!

BAHH! I love the ending!

I love the wrestling scene!

Poor Lily! James is so sweet why isnt he real?

That is such a sad letter! I love James and how he takes care of Lily