LOVED THE STORY! PLZ, PLZ, PLZ WRITE A SEQUEL!

Not bad...love it

That was a good story. I liked it

Wonderful first story. Kept me turning pages until the end. I hope you'll continue to write more ff after the success of this one. Next time you might consider adding a little more about what the characters are feeling/thinking; take advantage of the fact that this is a story rather than the TV show. Loved it.

Great story and I'd really like to read a sequel about the hotel room ... ;-)

THX

Hi

I just read your story it was very good.

Aw! I love it. Miss Parker was bad ass and yet sweet, which is the perfect mix for her. Great job! I was sad that this was the end. How about a sequel though and take Jarod's suggestion about a hotel room? haha.

Not exactly the ending I was hoping for, but I liked it.

Wendy

I wonder if Sydney knows that Jarod was watching them. I liked the fact that Jarod came back just to make sure Parker got out okay. My final question is where are you going to take this if this isn't the end?

Great chapter!:D Love it!Who doesn't like our fav. couple together! :D Can't wait to read more!

That was mean! I hope you update soon! I really like this story.

Great chapter! I LOVE LOVE LOVE it! Not sure why she called the Centre, but I know exactly why she untied Jarod! :D Can't wait to read more! :D

What a mean place to stop! I loved the chapter though and can't wait for more.

Wendy

OMG! OMG! You cannot leave us hanging like this. It's cruel. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! I cannot wait to continue reading.

this was sudden... going from being all over him to wanting him back at the Centre. you're not ending this fic with UST are you?