I love this ..I don't know why..you have some great dialog..

Aw, very cute nice story, I haven't read any with this pairing before.

Very nice. I especially like the 'superstitions/charms/omens/etc'; it's a very interesting idea. You'd think an all mechanical, techological race would be seated in logic, but the way you've presented makes it seem natural.

Thanks!

Awesome! The finger symbols remind me of a billboard for the new Transformers movie at the theaters, cuz it had closeups of Optimus's and Megatron's faces and on the side of Optimus's face he had these markings on him. -

Bumblebee: Did my movieverse self have markings, too?

ME: I don't know. I'd have to see your toy up close. ;)

This is good; I hope you'll write more!

I love the use of Transformers mythology. Everything from the astronomy/astrology to the finger symbols. and the passwords are neat too