I absolutely loved this story! One of the bests I have ever read!
Keep up the great work :)

Woah, OK, Piper can't have been 5, not if Aerrow was 9 and is now 15, she'd be 11 now

So far this story's great! c:

I never thought I'd say this but...
Talon Aerrow is H.O.T!
Poor Dark Ace,though...

This is the best thing I have ever read and ugh I wish I found this story earlier... I miss storm hawks alot and nnggghhhh :(

You are a genius! The story is great and you write well even if there are some minor faults (that are gladly overlooked). You captured the characters so well it makes me go nearly go crazy that this isn't an actual episode! i hope that maybe you can write a sequel to this or a one-shot. I would find it really interesting to know what became of Ace.

OMG! what awesome story! This is the only other SH fic that I've thought is truly amazing! It pulls you in and puts you on a roller coaster of us and downs and doesn't let you go till the end. I must say i a sincerly hoping you create a squeal of some kind!

I'm really curious to see what else you have written in the realm of fanfics

ohmygosh please write a sequel. This is so great

WOW THIS IS AMAZING :D GREAT JOB LOVED IT FROM THE VERY START!

When the FINALLY kissed, I actually whisper-shouted "FINALLY!" It's also two in the morning here, so that's why I had to whisper.

Please, please PUH-LEAZE do a sequel. Please please please please please please please! This was AMAZING! IT CAN'T END! I DON'T WANT IT TO!

I love the chapter. My favorite line was: "Uh oh. Someone catch him! He's gonna—" Reminds me of what Toph said in Avatar the Last Airbender said.

it was a good story

I got four words for you: make a sequel, please. :))

*Hands clapping* Awesome story good work! :D

Brilliant :)