Yeah, I dont like Harry. He really doesn't deserve Hermione..

dude... they already destroyed the locket.

Haha! You’re funny! I laughed!

Uh oh!

Hmmmmmm... lots to think about...

One of the very scariest scenes in the whole series!

So realistic! I love it

Well, you gots to do what you gots to do...!

Huge first chapter! I’m hooked!

Sure want to know the end too bad it's for it's continued.
Some dialogs are so full of shit it's wrong, but most of the story is just fine.
But the danger here is even greater and worse then others i read. So more harry then hermione is so dumb and stupid, for ron didn't only run away but damn betrayed them handing them over. And still you want to be his friend and be forgiving, i don't know you know lot about war or friendship but ron overstepped boundries and unforgivness just like the damn rat! If they can forget that or not see that omg damn what a dumb pushovers.

Nice good

It’s been a really fun fic for me to read. I’m only sorry that you didn’t get it finished. The smut was pretty good, and the characters were pretty true to the cannon, except for the points I don’t like, aka Ron and Ginny!. If you still need a beta, I’d be happy to do it, but I hope that the muse is still there to inspire you. You can find me on FN, and PM me whenever you want. Thanks for he ride!

Well done .

Good

Good

Good