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Eirikess chapter 19 . 10/15/2013 I know it's been a really long time since you've updated this. I've been reading fanfiction for a really long time, still remember when you posted your first story, and I can honestly say that you're maybe the best writer on this site. It would be really cool if you updated this sometime soon, I know there's still a Seth and Summer crowd here that are still waiting on the next chapter. Anyway, you're really good, so it would be amazing to se an end to this story! |
Guest chapter 19 . 12/29/2012 This story keeps me coming back. I hope you update soon. |
saraleo chapter 19 . 11/21/2012 i liked this story, dead as it might be. problem is, i'd guessed what the 'big problem' was back in chapter 3, and i hated the build up to this epic!breakdown because i knew it was going to be something similar, that just doesn't hold up. people are making a huge deal out of something that's quite a normal reaction - in-show, Kirsten did the same thing and nobody goes around saying she's a horrible person. Maybe it's me, but i hate it when this kind of clichè plot lines are used. If i was seventeen, alone, with a boyfriend who doesn't even return my calls, sure as hell i'd have a "termination". Why should i let a teenage mistake completely changing the life i've chosen? This "you killed my kid" kind of plotline really, really bugs me. It's not a kid, it's a four years old might-have-been, a possibility you didn't even know existed, so chill. It's really cheap, and OOC. If your best friend were to find herself pregnant and alone and were to decide that she didn't want a kid, and didn't even want to waste a year of her life hearing people gossiping about her and prejudicing her chances of going to college, would you stop talking to her? Not many good friends would - It's unrealistic. if you ever come back to this story, please write something about Kirsten having a confrontation with her son. By the way, why don't you check out season 4 of friday night lights - it has an abortion on it, and it's done really well, without useless hypocrisy. It's just something you do, then move on. It's your business, and nobody else. |
pst.kondeti chapter 19 . 8/23/2012 OMG i love this story sooo much :) i hope you will finish this story some day. Till then, i'll be waiting! |
tlomech700 chapter 19 . 6/21/2012 I just finished reading Ch. 19. This is a great story. It would be nice of you to finish this story. Ending on this note kinda depresses me. This is one of my favorite couples. |
kimboik chapter 19 . 6/5/2012 I hope you write another chapter even though it has been a few years. I thought it was so sad when he found out what summer did, and I would like to see how it ends. |
Ashley chapter 19 . 8/26/2011 Great story please finish. :) |
blueaznangel68 chapter 19 . 6/5/2011 Hey I know it has been awhile since your last update and you are probably not planning on writing this anymore, but just wanted to tell you that this story and the other one is awesome. Hopefully you will continue to write this and complete it even though The O.C. has been done for years now. Just love Seth and Summer though and the way you wrote them is great |
dsauer chapter 19 . 5/15/2011 hey not sure if your still updating this one but you really should its very well written and deserves to be finished hope to hear more soon |
AnnaWhite83 chapter 19 . 4/13/2011 Hi David, I have only just found your stories having not been on fan fic for the last 4 years but have to say i love your writing. Please please tell me you will be writing some more soon. Anna |
Random chapter 19 . 3/28/2011 awesome! you should finish it up :) |
jc1011 chapter 19 . 3/10/2011 please update ive been waiting since christmas |
Blazen chapter 19 . 2/16/2011 Hey, I'd like to see more of this. Very much in fact. I'll leave more appropriate review after the next chapter |
kydchino chapter 19 . 1/28/2011 I'm so happy you returned to this story and you want to finish it. That's so rare with The O.C. now days and especially S/S. I love your take on them and their relationship and although I was expecting the abortion secret, I don't know where this is going but I definitely want to be able to find out. Keep it up please! |
Toya chapter 19 . 1/13/2011 Good job! Loved it! |