| Reviews for Flesh to Metal |
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  sad person chapter 5 . 6/22/2016 When I first read this, I cried! When I read it again, I cried more! I was so overwhelmed. This is my favorite story of ALL time! |
| KittenWhiskers chapter 1 . 2/5/2015 God bless you and your story! I am really happy to FINALLY find a Christian FanFic writer! cya |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/7/2014 While I am sad that you have stopped writing fanfiction, I respect your decision and want to tell you that I loved your story. Thank you for amazing writing. |
 Diamond White chapter 6 . 5/15/2013 Oh :( I've been waiting for a new update :( Guess... this is the end for Domino and Optimus :( Hoped to read more about them... maybe about them having sparklings :( But... I guess... I loved these chapters and I will reread them many times if you leave them up on fanfiction's main site... Thank you for the wonderful chapters :) I really injoyed them :) :) :) And wish you good luck with the comic :D Can't wait for those too :D |
| Ki-Chan chapter 5 . 10/18/2012 YAY! An update! But I'm curious about something: will there be a chapter focusing on Runabout when he discovers what had happened to him and blaming Laura/Domino for it? (not that I expect them to see each other again anytime soon.) But anyway, thanks for the update. Looking forward to more! |
| Alligator Sky chapter 1 . 8/13/2012 Monty Python Transformers...now I've seen everything, is refreshing to see someone write a fictional character with a relationship with God, although I find myself confused as to how she survived the transition to a robot , this is the part where I usually say "Transformers Logic." (if Rodimus and company can get stuck in human bodies in the show...) If I might add some constructive criticism, the beginning part might flow better with a little more demonstration of action than exposition (or perhaps that's just me). And...maybe tone down the er...romantic bits...? Maybe throw a little scripture in to help her cope with her life- Psalms is always good :) |
| Diamond White chapter 5 . 8/13/2012 Yeah, well, it is about time you updated! I have been very anxious to know what would happen to Domino :) It was slagging worth the wait :) I loved every word of it :) Thank you for the update and I hope it will not take that long time for you to update again. I have read this fiction a million times! So please do not torture us again! Update soon! |
| fayoumi15 chapter 4 . 12/22/2009 really really great story! please update soon! |
| HawaiianJen808 chapter 4 . 8/22/2009 oh please! oh please! continue this story! i love it! please tell me when the next hapter is out! please and thanks u! keep up the good work! |
| The Iron Dreamer chapter 4 . 8/12/2009 This is awesome! I really hope you update soon! |
| ShadowThief93 chapter 4 . 5/16/2009 EH! IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT HERE! UPDATE! Random Autobot: She's insane..she's MAD! Mwahahahahahahaa! |
| WishUponAStar1015 chapter 4 . 3/15/2009 This story is amazing. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. It is definately one of the better Optimus/OC fics I've read in a long time. XD |
| SleepiPanda chapter 4 . 3/12/2009 xD Diary of a mad black woman ring a bell? |
| Mr Crossover chapter 4 . 3/9/2009 Please keep up this wonderful story |
| Elita One chapter 4 . 1/17/2009 wow its been a long time lol the knights that say NI love that part |
