| Reviews for The Immortal |
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MrWalkerMan chapter 1 . 2/4 Nice. I really like Immortal naruto stories, but most of them make Naruto into some apathetic, angsty bastard who regards human lives as menial. They make him a literal douchebag sometimes. While I agree that time would change him, I seriously doubt that he will lose all of that personality of his that just makes him... Naruto. His character feels as if the Author made an OC and named him Naruto. I like Naruto just the way he is, tbh. Anyway, good job. |
Navarone2013 chapter 1 . 12/4/2019 Great first story. A couple spelling errors but the premise and execution was great. It’s too bad there wasn’t much development of Naruto shown over the millennia. I know that could quickly turn it into a darker story if you aren’t careful but his comments in the book still seem so much like a 12 year old’s. The million clones he made makes me thing that he could potentially kill the Kyubi. If the Kyubi can shorten its hosts lifespan with its chakra maybe the opposite is also possible. Since the bijuu are pure chakra, he could increase his chakra pool to the extent that it smothers the Kyubi’s. A thousand years of stretching your reserves with shadow clones could do that... in a fanfiction. I thought it was a cool idea until I wrote it down. Also it’s cool how you didn’t give him the rasengan in his fight against Sasuke. His regeneration was just so good he never needed to learn it. And how people now associate red eyes with Uzumaki blood. A thousand years will do that to history. Red hair and seals are all but forgotten. |
pikachucat chapter 1 . 4/2/2019 awesome |
RinnaZevran1987 chapter 1 . 8/5/2017 Love It. |
AlucardChick101 chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 Awesome! Just wish this was longer. |
NikeScaret chapter 1 . 4/17/2016 This is really cool |
lkm chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 It would certainly be very interesting to be Naruto here. |
Whoooa chapter 1 . 8/31/2015 What kind of customer-tab does he has. I mean, a millenium of being a faithful customer... And finally a bright immortal!Naruto story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 I advise you to google the spellings of some words like biju ,tsukiyomi other spellings than getting all of them wrong |
CupcakeTrue chapter 1 . 5/11/2015 I absolutely love all of your stories! I've read all of them! Consider this a review for all your others stories. I can't wait for more I've even book marked you. Keep up the good work! Awaiting your next story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015 I hope you write more chapters. I can't wait to read more of this. |
T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 3/25/2015 Huh. That was actually really interesting. I liked that. The level of pure regeneration was astounding. I'm figuring other uzumaki descendants get a much much weaker form of regeneration along with their red slitted eyes. Great idea btw. Most people talk about crazy techniques and stuff that he learns but this is the first time i read of someone so focused on the pure regeneration. When one thinks about it with such a passive ability that gets stronger every time he is cute or hurt he could easily super train in any skill and most especially taijutsu and weaponry as he has nothing to fear from damaged muscles bones or blood loss. He could technically work out till he chose to stop. ANother thing I recall is the chakra he has since its so massive being used as a nutritional supplement to keep him healthy in his younger years (depends on the story you read) meaning he could basically not eat or drink and survive just fine. Meaning space and other should could be adapted too, supreme cold massive disintegrating heat, all could be with work adapted to. |
mattcun chapter 1 . 7/1/2014 funny |
Zecht chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 nice fic. |
Error4North chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 Funny little story. Good work. |