it seems strange that i haven't reviewed this, i read this a very long time ago and it's stuck with me since then. i realise that so late in the day a review for this may seem slightly strange, but i honestly thought i'd already reviewed it.
this piece of writing is by far one of the most beautiful things i've ever had the joy of reading, i can't count how many times i've read and re-read this (i admit to downloading it to a word document on my laptop so i could read it at my leisure whenever i wished) though some people might find this writing style confusing, i just adore it, you write Nisei perfectly, something that a lot of other writers seem to have trouble with, and i want to thank you over and over again for writing this.
again, thank you, i read a few other of your pieces also and they were all beautiful too, please keep writing!

My god, this is gorgeous. I wish I had the words to give a decent review but I am far too much in awe right now, so please accept my compliments and my favourite... Amazing.

Very well written even though I got confused half way

I'm in awe.

Haunting, ambiguous, lovely.