It's way too much effort to keep informing you about your slight mistakes, however I really honestly love your story. Although I advise you read over it one more time before you send it out because it's what made me The Confused One!

"What?" Sara said as a piece of pizza fell out of her mouth charmingly. Sara was in Grade Seven. She is slightly flighty and tends not to take *responsibility*

Since my parents are easy going, I hadn't really anticipated a challenge convincing them. (The real challenge would buying a ticket.)?

She (was)? a black halter dress with a gold belt around the middle.

"Really?" The LOAHG is Milly's project. It stands for: the List Of Admittedly Hot Guys. She picked guys most people thought were hot and put them on the list. There were four guys on it currently and (all of them were her tonight. )? One was Charles Stark, Grade Ten. Popular, good grades, *captain* of the tennis team.

("You look you're enjoying yourself.")? Someone whispered behind me.

I'll (she'll WHAT!?) you a second to dry your tears, so you can die with some dignity left."

"Oh I'll (once again, She'll WHAT!?) the second," I said. "But for something different."

"Oh little girl, you shouldn't have ran. It will just hurt more now." She called, looking in the wrong direction.

("No) so fast!"

I'll (she'll WHAT!?) you a second to dry your tears, so you can die with some dignity left."

"Oh I'll (once again, She'll WHAT!?) the second," I said. "But for something different."

But I still want to kick their butts. I hope you're okay wherever you are. (While)? bye for now at least."

The reason I can do that cool *telaporTAtion* spell is because I am a creature of light. You humans, would *CALL* me a Fairy Godmother. The head Fairy Godmother, in fact."

"Don't give me that!" Angerona barked "This human wanted me to possess her. She was *tirEd* of looking at children who were constant reminders of the fact that she would never be young again."

For moment his sadness almost made me pity him. But I quickly thought Magica? ({He has got his mind.})?

"Riding Hood Transformation!" I said (as my eyes.)?

AHHHH! Omidays,Omidays,Omidays,Omidays,Omidays,Omidays,Omidays,Omidays, Omidays! That was AMAZING! I wept,laughed,sighed and gasped as the story went on twisting my emotions like a powerful puppeteer. Write another one! Go on! Please! *Puppydogeyes* That not gonna work? Fine then I dare ya to write another one!

This was one amazing story. In fact, I would say the best fairy tale, hands down. Your writing is beautiful,and each character had such a well-developed personality. I loved them all, especially Honey and Talia. Actually, I loved every character. Eleanor for her selflessness, Emerelda for her wit, Talia for her toughness and brilliance, Clara for her friendliness, and, of course, Honey for that strong spirit of hers. Each character had her own journey. This story also triggers a lot of emotion. There were times when I wanted to laugh, cry, shout, or smile. Also, I would have never thought of Sleeping Beauty's reincarnation being so tough. Or any of the others. And, even though it was told in first person, you were able to get into each character's head. Not many writers can do that, and you are extremely talented. Sure, there were quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but this is the longest story I've stuck with so far. (And I can't stand mistakes!) This is also the longest review I've ever written. So pat yourself on the back, Queen of the Solar System.

Okay, I've been the world's worst reviewer.

But I totally called the Phil/Talia pairing.

Haha "Charlie would mention that he's dashing and leave it at that." you have no idea how perfectly you have pegged my friend Charlie.

And I do plan on reviewing every single chapter of this story.

All seventy-something.

aw! that was so sweet! i loved it! chris's point of view is kinda a funny and smarter twist on what happened.

O.O

I like it.

HEY! could you do a story on Ginger-Ginger and Clara?

oh my god i love it.! i really love this story. can't wait to read more. hsppy writing!

Yay! Thanks for giving Aiden a chance! he's my fav character... Cookies to you!

Ah! I wish i was as good as you! I can't seem to finish ANYTHING! But seriously, ever consider geting this published? I'm serious, I want to see this in a book store by 2010. The entire thing. I'm not kidding. You have got to send this to a publisher!

aw! how cute! i thought that aiden and calla would make a good couple!