First time I saw Shiek/Link lemons. I enjoyed them.
I also liked that Link wasn't knocked out for seven years, I haven't seen that before in other fanfics.
Unique, Well-written, funny, and sexy.

Well done.

This was just a middle of the road fanfic for me. Shink and OoT novelizations have been done so many times that I'm hardly impressed with seeing more of them. I did like the humor, altho it was sometimes used at inappropriate (tense/serious) moments. I liked how this went into 'what if' territory at some points which helped keep my interest (yet I still skipped many chapters out of boredom). Link was too OOC for my tastes b/c of being too chatty (he is, canonically, a man of few words, after all).

I loved every single bit of it, You brought my childhood to life with this amazing retelling of ocarina of time and having sheik and link be together was an added bonus. 3

Holy HELL this is amazing. I have no more words. You have stolen them all with this piece of amazing.

There's an old fan theory that has long since been quashed about the nature of the Sheikah. In the old Hylian emblem in OoT there is a fourth inverted gold triangle in the Red Loftwing's talons. The theory goes that there were four goddesses that created Hyrule, not three and that sometime after this "lost" goddess had a falling out with her sisters. This races of the Earth (element) which she created would have been mistrusted and poorly treated, thus her human race the Sheikah would only be allowed to exist in the shadows. It was interesting, unlikely but interesting. Apparently it got so popular that Miyamoto got irritated and had the 4th triangle removed in Majora's Mask and onward just the get rid of the theory.

So I'm in the process of playing Ocarina of Time for the first time and loving it. I enjoyed the way your story was a bit of a walk through in addition to the Link/Sheik love story. I've wished more than once while playing that Sheik wasn't actually Zelda. He makes for such a hot character all on his own, and you've done him justice. I loved your story :) Link was sarcastic and funny and brilliant as well. Keep writing! I look forward to your next story.

Wow, so is the implication that the red potions are Sheikah tears? If that was an intentional callback to that previous chapter where they were discussing the taste then that was amazing, and a great way to explain why Sheik's tears magically invigorated Link. I can't emphasize how much I loved that!

This story was just brilliant. The romance was taken slowly, they didn't go straight from their first kiss to jumping into bed, which so many authors do, and I really appreciated that. And the action was spliced in nicely with the romance, and well written at that. Their relationship developed so nicely and at such a great pace. I loved their flirting at the beginning. I like more descriptive and drawn out sex scenes, but, heh, to each their own, and I appreciated that you did put them in. Thank you for what is probably my favorite LxS thus far!

Every time I hear bring me to life I am going to start crying you know ;;

This story omg. It changed me in a way which probably sounds stupid but the last few days it's consumed my life. I'm not sure how long it takes a normal person to read a story this long, but for me if I'm really addicted, it takes about three days and I have to say that I completely fell in love. I don't think any fic can top this. It was so perfect. I am so going to reread this a lot. It inspired me to finish my Shink cmv this summer. I am going to dedicate it to you if I finish it in September. It's likely going to be based off this fic anyway. Gosh well done!

You really wrote master piece.

I think my favorite part of this whole story is how strong Link and Sheik's bond is. They were always fighting for each other no matter what and they kept going forward. It's that perfect kind of love. It's the way OOT should have ended if you ask me. Every time I play this game I am going to giggle like a silly fan girl and that somehow calms me.

Seriously thank you for writing this and taking me through A very enjoyable experience. They're honestly aren't many stories out there these days that catches my attention like this one. I don't think I read one is good in a very long time.

I mean wow!

Just thinking back on everything it already makes my wanna reread it *_*

I have not checked out any of your other work, but I will now after reading this!

I feel like I have so much more to convey to you, but it's 6 AM and I'm really exhausted and I don't know how to properly convey my feelings so I think you understand.

Thank you ;;

Sasurealian~

I'm crying, I'm crying, I'm crying so much that it's coming out my nose and I can't control my emotions. I seriously don't know how I'm going to continue on in life after reading this chapter! Link is alright, Sheik is too. Ugh they're so perfect and they're... Heros

And it's 6 am for the third night in a row I have read this until sun up wow

Okay I have to read the last chapter before I sleep I just have to!

All I can say this chapter is hell to the yes! This is just a victory chapter and I think I can guess what might be happening next.

Is it just me or do you wish that they would have a remake of OOT with this fic being the actual story? XD I would die happily

Oh thank you Sheik! I am so glad that you decided to reveal himself. I couldn't bear the thought of those two boys being separated. Although now that he is captured along with Zelda, that if you're going to make Link's Job a lot harder. I was actually shocked that Sheik was captured but it makes for an interesting rest of the story. I did feel bad that they didn't get much time together, I bet Zelda was just like ._. Lol
She had no idea. She is adorable though. I totally can see her as a supportive older sister and it makes me happy.

Gannondorf needs to die

Like yesterday

And Link needs to save Sheik. Also Zelda of course. But Sheik too mostly lol

Forward march on to the next chapter I go!

I think I must have screamed about 10 times during this chapter! I was in shock that Link kissed Zelda but that certainly did that trick. Oh please Zelda just put Sheik back with Link because they need each other oh goodness! I might cry ;; link is so amazing! Every chapter I am more and more pleased with him.

I also hope Sheik is okay. Gosh his heart must be shattering

I kinda laughed when Link was like 'I don't swing that way' xD I bet not after everything he has been through.
Tbh a female Sheik scares me
Like it just doesn't make sense
I argue this all the time and I try not to. It reminds me of Star Wars when princess laya is Masking the bounty hunter and like it's super obvious and just yeah you know something is up

Gosh it's late and I have no idea what I am even rambling about xD so sorry

I actually wasn't confused at all, you wrote this perfectly well.

I cried a little whenever Sheik cried and I felt pain whenever Zelda brushed Link off. I mean if she touched him any other way I'd swipe at her (and I am sure sheik would too) it's just that I was on the edge of my seat the entire chapter because I was scared about Sheik and Link and their relationship.

Ugh I was also scared when Link faced the Gerudo women. I thought he would fail withoutnSheik there, but he was brave. He did so well ;;

I am praying that everything goes well on forward. It's getting so intense now

I keep catching all your lyrical things and it makes me smile :) you're so adorable xD I love Linkin Park and evanescence :D

So this chapter left me feeling a little empty, but also satisfied in the way. I guess I'm just sad because I'm afraid of what's going to happen. I'm afraid link is going to hate Sheik because if zelda does disguise herself as Sheik and Link finds out he may not ever trust Sheik again and that worries me. :/
Especially because now that they are together, I feel that Sheik should tell Link stuff despite Zelda.

I understand that it is his job to serve the royal family, but this could really traumatized Link if he finds out. Which obviously he is. It definitely has the suspense level building and that's good because you don't want A boring story. I'm just a little anxious right now wondering what's going to happen. Good job on this chapter!

I loved everything about it :)

Wow, I'm really happy this chapter exist, you're actually really good at writing sex scenes :3 I'm impressed! I had to laugh though. Sheik being like 'yeah it will probably hurt but oh well' xD I figured. Sheik is stubborn. But it was really sweet and it made me smile :3 I am glad their bond is this closer now. I also am sad for Sheik. The loss of Impa is hard for him ;; Although I know he will be okay, he has Link to help him. :D

Once again, wonderful chapter and it was really a great read, I was smiling the whole time I was reading this chapter so... Awesome job *_*