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Too bad you lost some inspiration to your story. Hard to a focus and direction of a story.

Your story was going good until you gave us this notice. I hope you do eventually get back on track.

Later.

PS. If you have free time or bored. Read up on my story. Is a OCSaku story with a decent twist I think.

OMG I loved this chapter. WAY TO GO NARUTO! LOL i love his stupidness...remindes me of myself really. I can be pretty dumb at times. Yep. Anyways continue on with the chapter! YOU ROCK!

by the way...is Leon really gay? Lol

:D , good series :p , waits impatiently for the rest :p

I'm still glad that Naruto is kind of an idiot, gives him Naruto like quilities from the show! I haven't done that in a lot of my fics. Except Gakkuri.

YAY! YAY! YAY! Naruto and Sakura are on the same team! YES!

Naruto's perverted dreams! Funny! Icha Icha scene, that was bad!

Also, that line Naruto said to Leon, fucking halarious! You're just jealous that I'm straight and you're not. Fucking funny! I'm amped, sorry!

Good job on this chapter, although it was little short it still felt like a much longer one, except the ramen stand scene, but that's my own opinion which you can do what most do with it, toss it in the trash lol. I love how you made Naruto still the loveable idiot that we all know and love, while giving him some more of that fox trickiry that I always thought the show/manga didn't give him enough of, oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter, Late.

May the Schwartz be with you.

Well this worked on another author so I'll see if it will work on you, its reverse psychology (Cue the dramatic music). I didn't like this chapter at all, it was worse then stupid. I hated the so not funny moment with the Kyuu-kun. I don't want you to update soon. Yeah hope that works. See Ya!

Offer expires while you wait. Operators are standing by. (The original Transformers movie, the junk-yard world)

good story line but what do u mean by that last authors note give it up mas death to to us the summoning technique they just need massive amounts of controlled chakra and a bit of blood

Great chapter. I love it.

So, Kiba and them are good friends, eh? Before you go on, just to tell you, it goes by skill on how their placed. So, one of them has to be in the middle, one of them has to be kind of low, and the last has to be strong, at least by academy standards.

Nice chapter, but I don't like the ominous feeling I'm getting from that line...

Update soon!

Yay! Credit! I love credit! Thanks for the mention!

A short chapter, but it is a filler, so it's not supposed to too long. Funny, poor Nibi though, getting chased by mean old Kyuu-kun and Fen-kun! That could be nick-names for them that Naruto and Leon come up with after they learn about them! Just a suggestion.

I like the chapter, good interation between Kiba and the boys, although I'm kind of sad Sakura isn't the last one, it's understandable. Wanting to be original and all. But how are you going to build up the NaruSaku if they aren't on the same team, and they hardly see each other, 'cause they'll be busy with missions, too much so to think about a personal life. You should know that. Just to let you know, if it is this way, I know the NaruSaku will very, very slow. Oh well, NaruSaku is NaruSaku!

I'll be getting your fourth chapter back to by at least tomorrow.

Well the story does seem to be progressing at a nice enough pace. it is good that there are some more familiar elements to the story to help keep the readers on track. Things got a little one sided with the sasuke bashing...but to each their own.

Im a little curious how you are going to pull a narusaku with them on different teams. Havent really seen that one done before so it should make for an interesting read.

Good chapter! good planning for later ones. please continue