Thank you so much for completing the whole story. :) Lucky that I found this with 4 chapters and read it at a time. Please don't worry about losing touch, it's coherent and well written. You have a good touch on Shizuru's vulnerability and the sexual tension between them.

You mean Shizuru's underwear on Natsuki [insert smirk here].
I liked this story. A bit too much on thoughts, but otherwise a well thought out and realistic piece. Good job :)
Although I gotta wonder how Natsuki found where she was and how she got inside her home without the keys. Then again, there shouldn't be any real danger eh

The best erotic story I've ever read in my almost 9 years as a lesbian, and I've read a few. I would like to read you as an specialized book author soon, your ability for describing every detail without being repetitive is very hard to find among experienced authors. ¡Bravo chiquita, tu relato está increíble, muy bien escrito!

This has officially topped my Shiznat smut fic list.

I love the combination of plot plus some steamy scenes between these two. It has been a long time since I read a ShizNat fic and I am so glad I found this one.

Wooow.. So love the story.. Steamy!... Haaah.. Got to have can break often... Whheehwh!

Great great GREAT job author san!

Im in love with this story, I dont even know how many time Ive read it...its my favorite Shiznat fanfic ever! you did an amazing job! thank you!

Im in love with this story, I dont even know how many time Ive read it...its my favorite Shiznat fanfic ever! you did an amazing job! thank you!

Yep, definitely yuri but in a positive way. O! The writing was good...such emotional conflicts will lead to heated endings! Many thanks.

I absolutely loved this, Natsuki and Shizuru's interactions were just amazingly hot and sososo sweet! Thanks for sharing, this is really great. :D

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COMO LE VA?
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One of the first ShizNat stories I read. Still awesome and soooo in character. Your writing style is perfect, thank you this piece of art.

I loved it! thank you so much for taking the time to finish it and share it with us! :D

I have to admit, usually when kiss scenes are described, I don't really care or give it much thought.

But gosh, this kiss, this one kiss MELTED me. It struck me right to my heart.

"Short, sharp breath on her own lips told her Shizuru was only inches away and she could feel the heat of her body even more so now. Finally, she released her own breath and as soon as she had she felt soft, warm lips against her own."

I've reread it many times, and I still can't figure out why.

I'm really, really glad this was the very first fanfiction I read at this site. I keep coming here whenever another story disappoints me or just simply to enjoy your work one more time.

A big hug and a big thanks to you. _

terriiiffiiiccccc D