Hey !

I Just go through your fic (well the two of it to be honest) at once, keeping my breathe all along and leaving the others things like work or eat behind for at least two day long. You blew me girl! And only God know that english is not even my mother tongue! But I felt like I will never escape from that damn dark alley of horror! Thank you so much (more than 7 years after) for that masterpiece of yours! Hope you're doing well now cause you worth it!

DM.

will each chapter 18 of your stories cut my poor heart?

Okay I can't even begin on how perfect the entire story is. Friend or Foe and Friend or Flame. Literally 100/10. The one thing that upsets me is... THE PICTURES WILL NOT WORK! GAH! I can't see them. I suppose the amazing work makes up for the missing photos, though.

This is amazing. I won't be surprised if you make it huge in writing, you're very talented and obviously have a real gift. I wish you all the luck in the world with your books!

GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. FINALLLLLLYYYYY!

VICTORY!

God, Light, you're sUCH AN IDIOT. Agggghhhhh

Can I just say that tHIS IS THE BEST!

You're an amazing writer

I worried for the wrong person but it works better that Light was captured. Their conversation over the phone was reassuring in spite of their bad situation, it's good to Light's plans at work. You can do it L.

Thank you for your devotion to writing and caring to let us know what is going on in your life. I'm late to the game and it's been years but I hope you are in a better place and situation. L's plan sounds good outside of the fact that I am afraid that Webber was possibly already on their tail and is following L already. Light and L's parting was sweet and L accepting that maybe he's loved Light for a long time already, aww.

I love all the thought and detail you weaved together for L's backstop, the flashbacks and the story telling. My favorite parts were when Light was flustered, when even though L was recounting his horrifying idea he comforted Light when Light started crying, L's soft conversation starting with so forward and Light's retorts as thought he would be L's answer to everything haha

I was so excited when L enjoyed the oatmeal plain, omg and holy crap, progress! D:! 8D! L's gonna go attend Light's first tour xD The odd look... Light did describe how L looked like, I really hope things will be ok. I didn't expect L to ask a question during the tour, that's pretty distracting lol

That line about L never being aware his hand wouldn't be held again until seventeen years later TT Your narration of the video was gripping. I'm glad Light calmed down but holy crap when he got mean I was like oh shit this will not go well, I'm glad he redeemed? himself and was there for L was. If anything, I think you might want to put a warning for past graphic violence in case someone might be bothered by that. Great chapter and it was wrapped up nicely.

This was a wonderful chapter, I was left smiling throughout the entire thing :-D L is for love and C is for cute, what other letter words do you have for us in the future Light ;-)?