Reviews for A Little Carnival Competition
Padfoot'smyMan chapter 1 . 5/25/2017
Damn, I need to go to the carnival more often.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
I'd love to see that as a M.
Thanks really enjoyed it!
MysticalKC chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I Loved It!
Anne Black chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
That was very funny! and what a hot kiss! )
thekeeperoftime chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Hahaha! Great story!
its zabini not zambini chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
aw that was really cute! i enjoyed it a lot!
Punkindoodle chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
”I could beat your ass so hard you’d be crying for mercy!

I had to laugh at that! This was so light and fun, a joy to read!
RagamuffinSundrop chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Great story and your characterizations were spot on.
fantasygirl26 chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
I could beat your ass so hard you’d be crying for mercy!

And my response would be...beat me beat me make me bleed!
Goddess of Serpents chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
LOL This was hilarious and hot at the end XD

Challenging each other that sounds about right XD
SetTheTruthFree chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
it was very good

and yes, i noticed the double meaning in the sentence b4 u pointed it out xDD
SiRiUsLyInLuV71 chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
I loved it! It was so awesome! You need to do more of these!
Cris Pea chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Noice ;D

MAN, I WISH THIS WAS M RATED SO DESCRIPTIONS'D BE AVAILABLE but Alas, there are none.
this-love-is-sirius chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
I liked it, it was funny, and a good read.
Lady Imara chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
A little hurried but overall pretty okay.
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