This was a fun story, and very well written. I was slightly confused at the beginning because that man's last name is a woman's first name. But it was an interesting story. The end, when the boy thinks Carlisle is his guardian angel, is perfect. I also appreciate the 'T' rating.

Hey ! Your fic is awesome ! It looks like you're not going to continue ! But I wanted to tell you that the first chapter was awesome and I hope that you continue someday.

Bye. Lea.

I like it! It's very cute.

:)

Lovely fic. Makes me want to hug them both.

aw thats so sweet _

thats cute u should make it a story

Aw! I want a baby Edward! I shall keep him in my pocket and feed him on crumbs... tehe.

So, anyway, this is s GREAT fanficm and I hope to read more stories authored by you of this persuasion (I am in a REALLY odd mood today...)

Jolly Good!

i love this story you should keep going, like have carlisle keeping tabs on edward every few years.

That was really, really good. I'd love to see where you take this story.

please update soon!this is a wickedly interesting concept!

is this a story?if so than UPDATE!this sounds super interesting!

it was really good! and so cute...aw, little edward!

AWh.

that was SO cute. That last line... Ickle Eddykins is such a sweet boy!

:-) Very well written. Bravo!

This. Was. Absolutely. Amazing.

I can hardly get over it! Your writing is fantasic; I actually felt like I was reading the first chapter of a novel (something that you don't see often on FanFiction), and it was extremely original!

Was this meant to be a one-shot or are you making it into a story? If it was just a one-short it was brilliant, but if you are making it into a story I think it will be very interesting to see how this progresses.

Anyway, outstanding job! This goes on my favorite now.

Great Aunt Florence.

Aw, that's so sweet!

Carlisle is Edwards guardian angel. That's cute ]

I really like this so far... are you writing more?

I hope so! Update soon, please... if you're adding more that is!

-Skye