Yes! Beautiful, Midlink is my OTP

Well, ya don't see much Imp Midna love on this site so... I have to give you credit for that. Well I'm not one for sappiness, a trait which I believe inundated this short, I can still see and appreciate the effort you put into to it and therefore can look past my own particular tastes and recognize this story as being one of the better ones.

Keep up the good work!.. Or so I'd like to honestly say, but after checking your profile, it seems you are either dead or have lost interest in the art of composition.

ugh sorry blew my load really good man

Minda was always the best Zelda companion she was just so awesome to me. I never found Navi to be that annoying and Tatl I just complitly ignored and Fi wouldnt shut up for two seconds (mostly about my hearts because I suck big time at Zelda games) and i need longer than that to find love in a companion

Oh my god. This is one of the best fan fics I have ever read in my life.
10/10, I love it!

Awesome story

I really do love this story. I think I've read it twice now. It's both sweet and interesting. The flashbacks into actual game scenes are really well done (exactly how I feel they would act if Link were keeping up a real dialogue with Midna in game). The scene in the café was funny and the lemon was pretty hot. Honestly no complaints that wouldn't be harsh nitpicking(maybe the lemon could've been done better, but it was still good anyway and that's barely important). So thank you for the story! Best M-rated story out there for this couple.

Soooo good! A friend got me into midnaxlink and it looks like Im in it for the long run _

Awesome!

very good job. you should make a wolf form lemon.

I agree with you, Link and Midna is such a great pair, and at the end of Twilight Princess when she said "Link, I... See you later." I totally believe that she was going to say 'I love you' but she lost the courage and couldn't say it, and while Link thought she was dead was sad and his expression told me that he liked her a lot, and when he saw her in the distance, wow, he went RUNNING! I don't care what everyone else says, LinkxMidna will always be for me :)
Great job on the lemon, and everything, you captured the details greatly, awesome job! Have a merry Christmas! :D

Good imagry use. Excellent dialogue

this was good but in a funny way it was along the line's of rape. if you look at it side ways that is. anyway nice fic

Wow, that was your first lemon? You've got some amazing natural talent! I really enjoyed this fic, I thought Link was well done, in terms of his character. Midna was perhaps a bit too emotional, but you almost have to make her that way for this kind of fic. Overall, excellent. You wrote both characters better than I could've.

pretty good lemon mate, I'm a big fan of link/midna together anyways keep it up and more please :)