Te considero una persona increíble al escribir de esta manera, me encanta como escribes las historias y expresas la forma de ser de cada uno de ellos. Espero y en un futuro sigas escribiendo más fanfictions

Me encantó la verdad no puedo decir otra cosa mas que felicitarte, por esta increíble historia

This is such a cute beginning to Shunsui and Nanao's story! I love how it focused on their friendship and hinted at the epic romance they eventually have. 3

I love this pairing so much, great story :) please write more

I won't lie: That last threat sparked this review :P
Can I just say that I love how you write? The words you use and the way you use them is beautiful. I'm so jealous of your writing ability *Embarks on quest to write better*

I realize this review is late but PLEASE write more \o/

Nanao just got escalated.

I just thought of Spain from hetalia when I got to the part when Nanao chan is about to send the mysterious guy to soul society... Hahahaha I wonder why?
Ohhhh Nanao chan has an old flame!

PLEASE CONTINUE
OMG ITS SO CUTE
HELP
I'M DYING

Sooooo cute plz make more

Enjoyed this story - thank you!

I appreciate the conversation they had about perfection. The whole "nighttime garden" scene is well done.

And it's lovely that Nanao was moved to preserve the flower. I wonder what other romantic traits or gestures of hers you might uncover in other stories?

Thanks for a fun read. I'll check out some of your other work.

Makes me want to wander through a Spanish village! What time period is the story set in? If this is when Nanao first became fukutaicho, wouldn't it be at least 100 years ago or more? I can't remember how long they've worked together...

In this chapter I like Shunsui a little more and Nanao a little less. ;) But it's good groundwork. I think the ways in which he ultimately changes her may be more outwardly visible because she is wound so tight. And, he's got several centuries on her. That kind of life experience shows.

Steady character development this chapter. There's definitely chemistry coming though, but I appreciate they're not continually sniping at each other or insensible with ridiculous passion.

I'm really curious about Nanao's spiritual abilities.

And here's an opinion not related to the story per se. I find the author notes at the end more aggressive than clever. It makes sense to ask for reviews, but I'm a bit turned off when I feel bullied. I'd guess that most readers habitually review or don't review regardless of author commentary.

I'm enjoying this story, and will continue to review when I can. Thanks!

I like how you jump right into the mystery of Nanao's past and mysterious eyes. The Andalusian setting is intriguing, too.

And Shunsui. Sigh. He's one of my favorite Bleach characters and you're doing him justice so far. Thanks!

This story is off to a good start with sharp characterizations and clean prose. I like seeing both Nanao's and Shunsui's thoughts.

Looking forward to the rest!