Wow! You did a really wonderful job. You really get the emotion across, fantastic!

oh! this is interesting...

please continue!

People need to stop being so nit-picky about categories. I do not care whatsoever if this story is in the wrong place, because its wonderful. Even if it's all a little OOC-ish the story itself is beautiful though it's a bit depressing. Keep on writing! P.S. I think Naruto would be the type to keep a secret.

I loved the angst...And...it was really great. I liked the characters' traits.

Hello Maiden-Chan, this is Mr. Lee. I read your story. I'm afraid I have to agree with Flying Fox of Snowy Mountain in saying that your story is in the wrong category as far as pairings go. It's not even a NaruSakuSasu. Despite the fact that Sakura would NEVER send Naruto a letter like that even if she was still in love with Sasuke (Especially 2nd Arc Sakura) or that Naruto would just 'grin and bear it' after he was there for her, supported her and comforted her when Sasuke left (Sending that letter would, in my opinion, be like Sakura spitting in Naruto's face and saying the promise of a lifetime he made to her, which nearly costed him his life, was made for nothing. Not even 1st Arc Sakura at the end of the series would stoop that low.). This is a straight up 100% SasuSaku fic. It's not even an one sided NaruSaku since it's from Sakura's POV and we don't get a chance to see Naruto's feelings about all of this at all. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND that you switch this fic to the SasuSaku section, or face the wrath of the dedicated NaruSaku fans on this site. This is constructive criticism and should be treated as such. If I offended you or angered you in any way, then I apologize, since it's not my intention :(. Later :).

Yea... uh... take this out of this filter before you get more flames and more NaruSaku fans pissed.

I don't care where else you put it but take it out of here. You might wanna put it in the Teme Sakura section or Sakura all section, I don't give a damn but get it the hell out of here.

Just so you know, this would be considered the censored version of my review as I have some choice words I'd like to put but am refraining from doing.

Now, as I said, get this out of here, NOW.

This I believe does not really belong in this Naruto & Sakura category. The reason why is simple, you have Sakura still 'in love' with teme and not Naruto as far as I can tell from the story.

So why is this here? I know you wrote the summary with the NaruxSakuxSasu, but not really is it? More like SakuxSasu from my opinion and from Sakura's POV.

If you have her lying that she still in love with the Sasuke bastard...then you might consider changing it to Sakura & Sasuke category, more appropriate I think.