What?! The perv has a camera in there?! XD

Haha! I liked it! The title actually made me laugh out loud!

lol,this was too funny!trust Pegasus to lock them into the bathroom eh?lol. it might've been better in a oh well,a bathroom is much more funnier!

see ya!

-Takabi Tenshi

Hah, Pegasus is absolutely hilarious. I found one little mistake (haha I love finding mistakes): First you say: "If Yami were any calmer, he’d be smiling." and then you go on to say: "Yami’s smile doesn’t change." But that's all ;0 apart from that, the story is really good (okay, so it's not much of a plot... but its still good)

go, prideshipping. very cute dialogue, too. If i was pegasus, id lock them in there again, but make sure theres some yaoi-fangirl in there too, to give them some ideas. XD

Trust Pegasus to be annoyed that his prisoners aren't being creative :)

OMG! When I read this story I nearly fell off my chair laughing an then when it got to the end and Pegasus was watching then, well I was laughing so hard that I nearly wet my pants. I really like this story...