sorry for being negative
WHERE THE HELL ARE THEY GOING TO GET SO MUCH WATER IN SPACE!

Really enjoyed this story! Very well done all around. Characterizations were spot on.

Heartwarming story! i like how even malcolm got in the water!

_ nice story!

Never would have thought of that surprise! I might have liked to "see" how the games went (especially T'Pol and Malcolm), but still a great story.

Fantastic. That story was a pleasure to read. It had me smiling the whole way through. You captured the characters' personalities perfectly and, given your profession (former profession?), your layout and grammar is obviously spot-on, which is always nice to see. My favourite line was Jon's straight-faced delivery of the line, "Natural athletic ability."

Very nice story. I enjoyed it from start to finish.

I went to New York for my 50th. I was worn out too and had chocolate cake. First time for everything I quess including a swimming pool on a space ship that wasn't holographic. Great story

That was great! I loved it! Great job!

Great story! I always thought they should have a swimming pool on board! And I think Malcolm deserves an extra thank-you card for participating in the matches (loved the description of Phlox's bathing suit, BTW!).

Looking forward to your next story, Kathy!

Awesome! This was so cute! They should have made an episode like this! Excellent work!

Emma

That was a great story, I really enjoyed it.

Hehe! Of course they would not forget! But that was a surprise! Great idea, Trip! Lovely story.

Aww, that was lovely! Although poor Malcolm lol. Bless Jon for thinking they hadn't remembered!

Great stuff

~*~Exploded Pen~*~

Very nice character piece. You did a great job keeping everyone in character. These types of stories are difficult to come up with and you did a great job. It was a nice idea to have Archer melancholy about his 50's, yet he did not seem whiney or out of character. Good work. Hope you write some more.