I really love this! Can I translate this story into Chinese? There will be your name and a link to the original work in the translation, and you'll have a link to it! Thank you for writing this and have a nice day :D

Love this! Yumichika getting picked up by Ikkaku is my weakness...and can totally see this being canon too.

OOC doesn't disturb, I think. Maybe because I'm a IkkaYumi fan

I almost cried, it's gonna become a habit _ But I think it's good

( sorry if my english isn't correct, I'm french )

At that I had laughed a little, and pointed out that I was no lady. To that he had blushed furiously, and muttered, "Well, I still think you're pretty."

agjfuaohv.

This is just, ugh, I don't know. You just captured Yumichika so perfectly. I don't even know, just wow.

oh Yumichika, you silly boy!~! Of course he still loves you!~

WOW. For being your first Bleach fic, that's flat-out amazing, your writing is exquisite, and really, they're nowhere near as OOC as you think.

sad and sweet, very nice

AWESOME! Man I have never been into this pairing before but if you write anything more like this then I seriously might take it up!

I love it soo much, the whole thing, the feelings! hehe!

Though there are a few problems in it: spelling, missing words, etc. Other then that good read, flow and all of that.

'sob' This made me cry. (you are an amazing writter. I love this story and they're my fav couple from bleach too. :) I think you should keep writing about them cuz they really dont get to much attention and this was just such an amazing story ( you should write one about what ikkaku thinks about yumichikas real sword) that'd probably as great as this one :)

Hope to read more of your stories!

(thats long I think i over did it :D)

KEEP WRITING!

~DeepSeaGuardian95~

I love this. You wrote it beautifully but still managed to keep the characters with correct personalities! This pairing is underloved, and this fanfic really does them justice! Fantastic job!

As if kaku would ever leave yumi for any reason at all.

*SOB!*

Yumi is such an idiot. Of course Ikkaku will always love him. Duh! *hits Yumi over the head with my hat*

Me:Idiot, how could you think he'd leave you!

Yunmi: "But I just..."

Me: "shut up and go have make-up snogging with Ikkaku already!"

Ikkaku: woot.

;_; great...u made me cry!

Great fanfic! It was so sweet and touching. I really love dis pairing! -_- I hope you write more IkkaYumi!

~ Kuro-Chan

Aw that was so swet. I loved it. Good job.