AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH I am overwhelmed by the love

How is this confusing? It's tender and adorable and full of yaoi love and I love that. I also don't think it had a lot of ands. It was not only connected very nicely but written nicely as well.

AWWWW! Love it!

I can't believe I haven't found it earlier.

It's in no way confusing, no matter what people say. Your having a good grip on grammar makes it even better, because a grammatically correct text is so much more enjoyable to read.

The story itself is simply beautiful. What can I say. I really like LeonxCloud fluff. There's never enough of it. I love the way you described their feelings here.

Nah, not confusing at all- I totally understood it :]

So sweet and descriptive. Really like this.

First off, best summary ever. Second, This story was cute, like fluffy, rot your teeth from the sugary goodness cute. You did very well.

Loved the story and the pair! :D

i actually went on wikipedia to find out what astraphobia was.

nice story! cute, and i like how you worded things. it made me smile!

high-fives!

Squee! Well-written, sweet yet realistic, and deeper than most short fics go. I can't believe this story has so few reviews! It's a travesty! This is definitely going on my favorites list.

aw, cute

I loved this. I loved the style, the run-ons and elongated structure just pulls you in and holds you in that wonderful train of loving thought. Both their parts were so loving and endearing; full of such soft emotion... The presentation of it was great, just presenting their feelings in an unabashed way, and so softly done... Not smackings us in the face with it. It all flowed so well. Oh, and Clo's phobia was perfect, and I particularly liked Leo's feelings of sadism. [That's a very interesting tangent to go on, imo.] Great work!

That was so sweet and beautiful. I loved it! .