I'm not going to cry...I'm not going to cry...screw that I'm crying. That was beautiful, I've been following the original arc and to read this authorized branch of it...wow. You captured emotions here that even Crawler hasn't. Well done.

Oh man, that was a tear-jerker. I am reading the Ritzkin arc and HAD to read this. You did a wonderful job of grasping the sorrow and grief Gus was experiencing at the loss of his son.

That was really beautiful

That was beautiful, you've got a slightly different style to Crawler but it works well, and this is a great fic to compliment the rest of the Ritzkin arc.

It was lovely to get an insight on Gus for once as well, and I like the way you incoroprated flashback bits from Crawler's work.

All in all, I like, lots.

*sniffles* That was... wow. I just got around to reading all of this, and it's not even the afternoon yet, and I'm in tears. That was beautiful, so sad. You did a great job Wolfjet, and I hope you don't mind if I add the link to this on my site, along with all the links to the Ritzkin arc. It belongs there.

I have to go now, I think I've got something in my eye...

Emi

Ah - the angst! *clutches heart dramatically, falls onto knees* Lots and lots of angst...

Yay! First review!

You know I love this story already. So much so, that I've saved it to my computer, read it three times, linked to it from my profile, and am marking it as a favorite story. _

~Crawler