Big rutting moose. This has been hilarious. Safly I see it has been a long while since it was updated. Bummer.

Im going to have to agree with momochan. You cant leave a story like this

Okay I just read this whole thing in one night! May I start off by saying this story is fantastic and I love your OC Alex! Ironhide's reactions to her are brilliant and I couldn't stop laughing at the phone call seen where she was washing him! I read it more than once cuz I loved it so much! You just CANNOT leave this story where it is! I need more of this story and it's too good to leave alone! Alex needs to find out that she actually does have a robot and we need to see what happens with Jazz! So please update again soon because I really want to know what happens next!

I'm really enjoying your story and seriously looking forward to the next chapter

I love this story I'm not even that far in thinking Will is whipped...

Don't you think it's about time that you wrote MOAR of this wonderful tale?

plz continue this story as its awesome

this i like it captures the characters in a believeable way but with humor

Absolutely the TF best story I've read! There must be more...

Nice chapter!
Can't wait for the next one! (:

Whens the next chapter gonna be?! I can't wait!

Awesome! Loved Ratchet and Mikeala's visit! Update soon!

Awesome story! I can't wait till the next chapter! It's like a good movie that you watch, and then reenact the best parts with your brother! Super Awesome!

hehehehehe, I love this story all I do is laugh! monster moose right? hahah
wonder when ironhide will blow his cover? hope he does would love to see her reaction!
poor soldiers having to deal with the twins... hope they are coverd in mud or sand before they get back to base, should keep them busy for a couple hours. bwahahah
the soldiers could also only give them cars that arn't yellow and red to pick from when they do get back to base. loving ratchet, hope he fixes Jazz... also hope Prowl is there when he does can't have a Jazz without a Prowl

hope to read more soon

hahaha ironhode trapped by a rubberband and i cant wait to see sam either tortured or enjoying the twins meeting bee and reuniting with the hatchet btu u realy gotta show them getting themselves over-energized hehe if therye bad sober i cant wait to see it haha