Great idea and really well written, loved both your stories about the green/gold!

Thank you. Cool stuff.

Congratulations on publishing your book! I hope you do well. And thankyou for the time and effort that went into this story, especially when you were writing your own book. You are awesome, and I to say goodbye to your pern story.

I hope can reunite the two pairs again. Did she get a recipe?

But who is this rouge dragon?

Did they do something to this dragons mind, too? Poor dragon.

They just need a lot he dragons to attack. Flame them. Take them between forever! Protect your queen Bendon!

Please don't let the new weyrleader be the bad guy. Please? I hope the new queen riders ability to sense connections will help the poor pair. And her, as I assume they are going to attempt to steal her queen.

That was unexpected. Is that even allowed if the mating flight wasn't declared an open one? Is he allowed to be there? I' it wasn't K'lin but ok with you the obvious choice :)

It might have been better if they had both died! Do these hidden players have a way to decompress the dragon, or are they just going to imprison her?

What are these hidden players up to?

She will make a fine weyrwoman.

Yey, I was afraid you would skip forward in time. I so want to soak up every bit of this clutch. Especially the hatching. Thankyou thankyou thankyou for this whole 'nother story!

Each time I read these two stories I love them even more. Thank you.

Both stories are wonderful - thanks for sharing.

Your lead in bit to this chapter made me go to Amazon to look at your books, and it turns out I'd already bought one :)