| Reviews for Elysium |
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   AcidESP chapter 24 . 3/29 good history, continue it, see ya, chao! |
| Reader chapter 22 . 9/11/2018 ZanBATO, idiot. Besides, Zabuza's sword isn't even a zanbato, it is more an oversized kitchen knife. |
| Reader chapter 6 . 9/10/2018 I request that we make Itachi a Sage. His wisdom on the superiority of pocky over ramen is undeniable. |
| Hmason chapter 24 . 11/5/2017 really promising story shame it hasn't been updated in 4 years hope you return to it |
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/17/2017 Haha loool when he sang the lyrics to remember the name I was howling lol |
| my 2 guys chapter 5 . 6/29/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 4 . 6/27/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/26/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/23/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| YumiKnowsBest chapter 24 . 7/27/2015 even though you say the beta has returned, most of us are waiting for the next chapter, but since its been 2 years I hope your alright, please hurry up and post the next chapter. |
| yindragonkiba chapter 24 . 6/19/2014 Wow awesome I like it |
| Silent Bunshin chapter 24 . 12/1/2013 I like this story and the different route you have taken it to as well. I look forward to your updates if you are still working on this story. |
| Silent Bunshin chapter 7 . 11/30/2013 Liking the story so far. I like the twist you put on the story line. My only complaint is the consistent and incorrect use of "defiantly" in your story and many others I have read. The word you are thinking of is "definitely". I know it doesn't look too different, but it drives me absolutely insane how many people misuse and confuse these two words. Look them up or just look at their root words and you will see the errors for what they are. |
| Kleily chapter 1 . 10/24/2013 good |
| shadowmaster0304 chapter 24 . 9/29/2013 This is great. You should update soon. |
