I am an American I read this with a british accent in my head.

Darling, I must say this story is extremely fabulous. DARLING, Absolutely fabulous.

LOVE IT!

More, more, more please

What a wonderful has veela love, dragons, purseltongue, right amount of hurt comfort,humor, angst, friendship,action adventure and mysteries. I am addicted to it.

Love it :D

YAY! Great job on this one!

Fuck muffins you get cupcakes! This is absolutely fabulous! I want MORE! oh my god please write more! This is such a fantastic fic!

awwwwe... pwease get the next chapter up soon! *innocent child voice* I think that this is a great story, pwease get the next one up.
luv the plot & how it's going so far...

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I decided to go back and reread your story, but as a heads up I notice you have quite a few mistakes that make this difficult to read. Spelling, diction, syntax and organization problems just in the first chapter. However, this story is in my notifications, so I obviously like it; this is not a flame, just constructive criticism:)

KIWI VAMPIRE! Sorry had to say it. When Harry said Kiwi I immediately thought of this picture I found while looking for pictures of anime vampires and it was the cutest little picture of a kiwi with fangs and and big eyes and small wings and instead of a regular speech bubble it has a cut in half kiwi with the words 'I'M A VAMPIRE' written inside! It's so cute, you can find it if you just type in kiwi vampire for google images or u can use the deviantART link that takes u to the persons account because it's their deviantID.

Noooo poor Draco!

I hope you are going to continue this! Its a really good story! I LOVE Sirius! I'm so glad he's back! He's my fave after H and D.

Jeesh, Pansy is annoying, if it was me I would have pushed her away until she fell on her fat arse. Anyways, I'm going to keep reading. This is good so far.

great story!